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Post by Alexander on Jul 29, 2015 2:19:20 GMT
| Primrose Grove
| "You humans are so cute."
| The First Rose || Female || -- || adjuahs
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APPEARANCE
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PERSONALITY
» Likes
➀ Flowers
➁ Books
➂ Her family
➃ Sweets
➄ Gardens
» Dislikes
➀ Bells
➁ Quincies
➂ Death
➃ Arguing
➄ Fish
» Positives
➀ Loyal
➁ Humble
➂ Patient
➃ Good listener
➄ Gentle
» Negatives
➀ Brutal when provoked
➁ Easily bored
➂ Silently Venting
➃ Overly Cautious
➄ Prideful
HISTORY
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| [B]ORIGINAL[/b] - [i]http://i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/956/578/de3.jpg[/i] – @thedealer |
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| LIST Name: Rugido (Roar) Class: Hollow Technique Type: Offensive Range: 25 meters Tier: III Description: Many hollows have been known to give off a recognizable roar or scream before attacking. For the most part, this just seems to announce their presence and intimidate the prey they stalk, but for some hollows this roar can cause far more damage than simple intimidation. A hollow with this ability can scream with enough power to cause a shockwave of sonic force, travelling at Cero Speeds, strong enough to crack the earth around it and force opponents of equal or lesser rank backwards, injuring their hearing and sense of balance. Name: Viento Violento [Violent Winds] Class: Hollow Technique Type: Offensive Range: 10 Meters Tier: III Description: This ability causes the user to create some sort of twister around themselves as two wind like blades wrap around the caster and spins the user at high speeds, at Cero Speeds, in order to strengthen the cutting speeds of the blades to cut their foes with deep lacerations at advantage. The down side to this ability that while in this form they cannot use any other ability and once this move is over they will have a slight delay in movement and having slight trouble with sight for 2 posts. Name: Disco Espiral [Spiral Disk] Class: Hollow Technique Type: Offensive Range: 50 Meters Tier: III Description: A powerful technique has the user using the energy itself on their hand or leg. The energy surrounds the target limb until it glows light blue. This technique when used correctly can turn the selected limb into a blade of pure energy. The blade of fire burns at a highly accelerated rate and being cut by something like this is dangerous to the body. It may feel like a regular cut but as the battle goes on, the cut made on to the body lowers the natural movement of the opponent by 1 advantage and damages them from within. Which only last for like two to three posts. Name: Explosión sónica (Sonic Blast) Class: Hollow Technique Type: Destructive Range: (25 radial Meters) Tier: III Description: Gathering reiatsu into the whole body, the user forces the gathered reiatsu out of the body forcefully, into a burst out manner, that is able to form a sonic blast, travelling at Half Bala speeds, at a 360 degree area around them, making the ground crack and damaging from the force anyone in range. | CUSTOM
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BATTLE SKILLS Name: Bala (Hollow Bullet) Class: Cero/Bala Type: Offensive Range: 100 Meters Tier: I Description: A weaker but quicker alternative to regular Cero blasts. The technique hardens the user's spiritual pressure and fires it at around twenty times the speed of a Cero. - Default ability for Arrancar and Adjuchas Hollow
Name: Cero (Hollow Flash) Class: Cero/Bala Type: Offensive Range: 100 Meters Tier: IV Description: Are high-powered energy blasts that can be fired from various places on the body. Only Menos, Arrancar, and Vizard have so far been shown to use Cero attacks, and it appears that stronger entities can use it more efficiently. - Default ability for Arrancar and Adjuchas/Gillian Hollow
ITEMS N/A REIATSU FEATURES Smell colour and aesthetics. HOLLOW POWERS |
Rose
Plant
the rose on her tail opens up
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HOLLOW POWERS ABILITIES Name: Perfected fragrance
Type: Poison
Tier: IV
Range: 100 meter diameter
Description: The perfected scent of roses. While active the user's tail sends out a veil of golden powder with a unique scent. If inhaled or touches a target the effects slowly take hold based on advantage. The opponent is then effected by a paralysis similar to tetnus. painfully tightened muscles and locked joints. paralysis lasts for three turns.
Name: Toxic touch
Type: Poison
Tier: IV
Range: on contact
Description: Most plants grow to have a self defense and so do many other creatures. When active the user's body is coated with a pinkish-purple toxin or at chosen parts of the body. When this toxin makes contact with a target or object it begins to break apart from Tier three damage if applied to a projectile. If physical contact is made with the user and target it suffers Tier four damage. those hit by the poison are effected by horrible painful blisters that pop, spraying more poison one turn after being placed dealing more tier 4 damage. the user is unaffected by their poison.
Name: Dance of a thousand pellets
Type: Offense
Tier: II
Range: 100 meters
Description: The start of winter, signaled by the falling of leaves and pellets. When active the numerous pellets along the back of the users neck begin to flutter off and float beside the caster. When chosen the user can send these pellets at Bala speed toward a target area or person. (This ability can also trigger the effect of “Toxic touch” when the ability is used in unison with this.)
Name: Final garden diameter
Type: Offence/ Binding
Tier: IV
Range: 100 meters
Description: The grand garden, a true sight for any nature lover but also a dangerous thing when it forms. When active over the next post the ground within 100 meters of the user turns into a gaint mutant garden that follows the users will. From this monsterous garden the user can summon small versions of itself(maximum of 3) to not only see around the are but attack for them. (deals tier 2 dmage per attack, can also use Toxic touch) The roots can be willed to bind the target for the grand exit. (roots are as strong as a sealed zan) On the final post of the garden every plant within 100 meters of THE FIRST CAST POINT is set ablaze dealing Tier four damage for the reminded of the post. (garden lasts 5 turns, can be canceled anytime.)
MASTERIES HOLLOW POWERSaverage
WEAPON SKILLbeginner
HAND-TO-HANDabove average
HOLLOW TECHNIQUESbeginner
HEALINGMASTERY LEVEL
| SOUL RESILIENCEaverage
REIATSU CONTROLaverage
STEPPINGaverage
CERO/BALAaverage
ITEM CREATIONMASTERY LEVEL
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2015 18:04:48 GMT
You're missing a 180 x 370 hover image this is required.
You need at minimum in your mini-profile your OOC name and your profile link. Also note it is a 100 meter diameter.
Your display name should be that of the character, i.e. Primerose Grove.
Perfected fragrance - This can't cause actually paralysis as it is an illusion and not real.
Toxic touch - The only effect of the poison is Tier IV damage? Why not just make this a Tier IV offensive tech then and not a poison based one?
You can't start with Above Average Hollow Powers.
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Post by Alexander on Jul 31, 2015 20:28:11 GMT
fixed
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Post by Deleted on Aug 2, 2015 21:17:11 GMT
Final garden - Note this is a 100 meter diameter.
Dance of a thousand pellets - Note this is a 100 meter diameter.
Perfected fragrance - You can't make someone actually paralyzed if there is an illusion. Illusions techs can only be illusions. You can make them feel as though they are paralyzed via the illusion, but you can't actually make them paralyzed.
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Post by Alexander on Aug 2, 2015 21:51:04 GMT
the illusion tech is half illusion half poison based. the paralysis is from the poison which causes illusions when inhaled.
also fixed
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Post by KUM0 on Aug 3, 2015 12:04:11 GMT
Perfected Fragrance ~ needs a duration for paralysis.
Final Garden Diameter ~ you need to specify how many small versions of yourself you can summon and when your garden attacks how much damage in terms of tier is dealt as well as how strong the binds are since when it burns it deals T4 damage you need to specify how these other things work before it burns.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 3, 2015 23:10:56 GMT
Final garden diameter - Note this is a 100 meter diameter.
All else seems fine.
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