How to harden a body

Your weapon skill, whilst detailed and otherwise thorough in your approach, falls short of above average, basically its too big of a jump for just what you've written alone. That being said it is more than enough for average mastery so I can approve it if you want average, if you still want above average I'm gonna ask for considerably more than what you've already written thus far with a little more inflection/ reflection. Remember you're also growing as a character whilst you train and as such reflection plays an important role in growing.