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Post by bobbykill202 on Aug 21, 2016 18:50:22 GMT
| | Sugita Tadamchi | | I never back down from a fight! | nickname/alias || Male || Straight || 17 |
APPEARANCE
Height:1.76 Meters (5"7)
Weight: 138lbs (63kg)
Hair Color: Brown
PERSONALITY
Sugita is thought to not think before he acts, but this proves to be false. He does think, but rather quickly. He is headstrong, a trait that causes him to make many enemies but also friends.
In battle Sugita has a unbreakable will he has proven that under no circumstaces will he ever give up or admit defeat, Sugita is also incredibly rebellious and hate's the thought of being controlled by anyone including the law,although he's claimed to be selfish the type of person who will do anything for the right price, but this is not true he will challenge any foe or odds to protect the ones he cares for. However he can be quite level-headed in a fight, causing him to underestimate his opponents and their abilities.
He also dislikes opponents who are much weaker than him, mostly because he believes those kinds of fights are "boring"
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| BATTLE SKILLS Name:: Kazaguruma [風車, "Windmill"] Class: Hand to Hand Technique Type:: Offensive. Range:: Self. Tier:: III Description:: Kazaguruma is comprised of two movements, one is which the user jumps into the air at 3x natural speed, leaving a trail of the condensed physical energy behind them, before crashing down with a hard kick at a target knocking them away, up to 50 meters to be specific. Kazaguruma can be used in any manner, either in a frontal kick, sideways, backwards, any numerous amounts of ways to utilize it, and can be used to set up an advantage. Name: Chouhigezutsuki [超ヒゲ頭突き, "Super Stubble Headbutt"] Class: Hand to Hand Technique Type: Offensive. Range: Self. Tier: II Description: An incredibly basic attack in which the user simply slams their head onto the person infront of them, causing a 5 meter knockback and doing very little damage outside of a bruise on the point of impact. Name: Class: Tier: Type: Range:Description:ITEMS Link
REIATSU FEATURES Link
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Henkō shimasu Augumentation Channels from his right arm |  |
ITEM FORM
By altering the mass surrounding Sugita he has the capability to be able to form his entire right arm by coating it with a protective metal alloy up to his shoulder blade with three fins attached to it.
FULLBRING APPEARANCE
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FULLBRING ABILITIES Name:Fissure Uplift (Kiretsu ryūki- 亀裂隆起)
Class: Hand-to-Hand
Tier: III
Type: Offensive
Range: 100 meters
Description: By punching the ground and channeling energy into his right arm, Sugita can generate a small amount of energy that cracks the air. Dealing tier III damage. Moves at half bala speed
Name: First Strike (Sensei kōgeki- 先制攻撃)
Class: Hand-to-Hand
Tier: II
Type: Offensive
Range: 5 meters (16ft)
Description: Sugita begins to slide across the ground and pivot repeatedly in order to either maintain or increase his momentum, before thrusting his fist at the target and unleashing a powerful wave of force. Dealing tier II damage and moving at half-bala speed.
MASTERIES FULLBRINGAVERAGE
WEAPON SKILLBelow Average
HAND-TO-HANDAbove Average
REIRYOKU TECHNIQUESMASTERY LEVEL
HEALINGMASTERY LEVEL
| SPIRITUAL POTENCYBelow Average
REIATSU CONTROLAverage
STEPPINGAverage
SOUL COMMUNICATIONBelow Average
ITEM CREATIONMASTERY LEVEL
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Post by KUM0 on Sept 2, 2016 13:35:07 GMT
Fissure Uplift ~ you might want to consider revising your wording here as its a little confusing, a fissure is when the earth splits apart which im sure you probably already know, so how exactly do you create a 'fissure' of energy here? does the energy burst upwards to harm your opponent or is it something they fall into.
Also bearing in mind that fissures are only created by earthquakes 8 or higher on the richter scale that would translate to a TV/VI+ level technique, please refer to the technique guide as it outlines the level of damage each tier is capable of doing. I sincerely doubt you'd be able to cause a fissure with a TIII.
That aside everything else looks good so you should be good to go after revising that tech.
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Post by BM on Sept 12, 2016 1:30:34 GMT
Fissure Uplift - As TPM mentioned in his post I think this tech needs to be worded a bit better to get across what it is you're actually doing. Say punching the ground with an energized fist, but then it says "cracks the air" which I don't really understand.
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