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Post by Arthur Giles on Jun 19, 2016 0:30:12 GMT
| HADO Name: Hadō #4 Byakurai (Pale Lightning)
Class: Kido
Tier: II
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium (30m)
Incantation: Broiling black, fervent heat, be rejected!
Description: The user gathers high-density reiryoku, which they discharge from both hand. Alternatively, they point at their target with their index finger and generate a concentrated bolt of lighting towards them. It's speed is x.1.5 faster than a Bala, unique to it.
Name: Hadō #48 Onkyō Shakkahō (Echoing Shot of Red Fire) **
Class: Kido
Tier: IV
Type: Offensive
Range: Long (50m)
Incantation: Ye Lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! The scorched Earth bears the mark of your bane. The demon waits at the end of the twisted halls of pandemonium, eyes filled with furor, in the torrents of Hell!
Description: Fires a screeching arrow-tip shaped blast of crimson flames. The speed is that of a Cero, and leaves a scorching trail in its path. Due to its shape, it may pierce through its target at equal advantages before exploding.
| BAKUDO
Name: Bakudo #46 Inshitsu Chōchin (Devious Paper Lantern)
Class: Kido
Type: Binding
Tier: IV
Range: 30 Meters
Incantation: The long awaited Festival of the Dead begins! Cheer for those who are lost to the heavens, for you shall soon be joining them!
Description: The opponent is surrounded by a barrier in the shape of a green paper lantern, with openings above and below. At the caster's call, fire shoots into the lantern barrier from the openings, charring the one trapped inside.
Name: Bakudo #57 Kitai Rakka (Curious Falling Petals)
Class: Kido
Type: Binding
Tier: IV
Range: Long
Incantation: Drink from the overflowing cup! Sate your thirst on the cursed wine of the gods, and blanket yourself in white funeral chrysanthemums!
Description: A large white orb of reiatsu appears above the caster and target, then explodes into a flurry of hundreds of white petals. The petals slowly float downwards, harmless in appearance and reiatsu signature. However, Kitai Rakka's true power is shown when the petals make contact with any surface. The stored reiatsu in the petals is released in the form of weight, and the feather-like petals now exert 100 kilograms of pressure each. They blanket over the target, crushing them with their combined mass.
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| MISCELLANEOUS Name: Hado #34 Kongōbaku (金剛爆, Adamantine Blast) *
Class: Kido
Tier: III
Type: Offensive
Range: 50 Meters
Incantation: N/A
Description: This Kidou creates a massive spherical ball of red energy has the appearance l of a meteor and causing explosive damage as well as flame damage once hit. |
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Description:KIDOU SPECIALISATIONS Eishōhaki (詠唱破棄, "Incantation Abandonment"): is the skill in which a Kidō practitioner skips using a spoken incantation completely, but it drastically weakens the spell. This is applied as a 1-2 tier drop in the spells power depending on ones Kidou mastery, 2 for Beginner up to Advanced, and 1 for Mastered and above. However this also lowers the spells cooldown to match the lowered tier, to a minimum of Tier I.e.g A Tier IV Kidou be cast with Eishohaki as a tier II, its cooldown will also be the same at 0 posts. BATTLE SKILLS Name: Class: Tier: Type: Range: Description:Name: Class: Tier: Type: Range: Description:Name: Class: Tier: Type: Range: Description:Name: Class: Tier: Type: Range: Description:Name: Class: Tier: Type: Range: Description:Name: Shunpo (Flash Steps) Class: Stepping Type: Stepping Range: N/A Tier: I Description: A movement technique that allows the user to move extremely quickly over short distances. The focal point that determines the basis of this technique is speed. Therefore what determines the level of skill in a user for Shunpo is best characterized by how fast one can get from A to B in the least amount of steps. ITEMS REIATSU FEATURES Tunic Green Smells like JUSTICE ZANPAKUTOU |
masayoshi elemental time to turn up the heat, Masayoshi |  |
SHIKAI APPEARANCE Masayoshi becomes the master sword, changing Urudraug's clothes to a green tunic. He also gains a mirrored shield similar to appearance to the shield from Ocarina of Time.
When Link releases his shikai he is restricted to the first ability below. Due to the fact he suffers from multiple personality disorder, whenever Link suffers "sunstroke" his personality changes to that of an insane person with no regard to others safety. At this point he gains access to his other 3 abilities.
SHIKAI ABILITIES Name: Fire Slash of Justice
Class: Release
Tier: III
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Description:
Link lights his sword on fire for the duration of a post. During this post he can slash in the air to shoot a slash of fire that moves at half Bala speed. These slashes light what they hit ablaze. If the target is Awick the target is consumed in flames briefly incurring a stun, based on stuns in the technique guide. Flames generated by Fire Slash generate 20 heat upon hitting a target, and 10 heat every other post up to a cap of 50, at which point Link over heats. Over heating causes Link to suffer “Sun Stroke” pushing him to the brink of insanity.
Name: Awick
Class: Release
Tier: III
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self-50m
Description: Fire abilities cause the enemy to become “Awick”, or in layman’s terms, a living fuse. While they are Awick the enemy takes increased damage based on how many abilities they have already been hit with, each ability stacks up a .5x dmg buff up to a cap of 1.5x damage. Additionally when Link attacks an Awick target it sets his sword ablaze. Like flint to steel. This ability interacts with fire based abilities.
Name: Aegis of the Courageous Hero
Class: Release
Tier: IV
Type: Defensive
Range: Self
Description: Link can absorb damage that comes from energy based attacks into his mirrored shield.. Link can hold onto the damage in his mirrored shield for up to 3 posts. While the damage is held Link mixes his own reiatsu into the attack. If the target was not Awick when the attack was absorbed then Link can make hard light projections up to a cap of 3 projections, note that these projections mimic Link’s movements, but do not deal damage. However, if the target was Awick when the attack was absorbed, Link can still hold onto the attack for 3 posts (while fusing it with his reiatsu) and shoot the attack back at the target at Cero speed with the attack being the same Tier as Shield. These attacks shot by the shield interact with targets who are Awick.
Name: All Out Attack of the Defender of the Innocent
Class: Release
Tier: IV
Type: Offensive
Range: Self-20m
Description: Link takes in all the surrounding flames, supercharging and heating his blade to its peak. When this blade comes into contact with an opponent, or when Link decides, the absorbed flames are discharged, as well as all heat dropping Link back to zero heat, dealing damage in a 20m sphere around Link and the target. Link is immune to the damage caused by this technique. When used on an Awick target, the blade heats up to an even further extent to a point it can cut through near anything. (Baring things such as Zanpakuto or things of that nature.) Damage calculation applies normally, this effect is purely for cutting through items that damage calculations do not apply, such as a skyscraper.
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MASTERIES ZANPAKUTOU SPIRITAverage
WEAPON SKILLAbove Average
HAND-TO-HANDBeginner
REIRYOKU TECHNIQUESAverage
HEALINGMASTERY LEVEL SQUAD FOUR ONLY | SOUL RESILIENCEAverage
REIATSU CONTROLAverage
STEPPINGAbove Average
KIDOUAverage
ITEM CREATIONMASTERY LEVEL SQUAD TWELVE ONLY |
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Post by KUM0 on Jun 19, 2016 12:19:58 GMT
Fire Slash of Justice ~ When he slashes the air how fast does this fire travel?
Aegis of the Courageous Hero ~ How exactly do you 'hold on to damage' when you're absorbing it, this technique sounds like you're simply firing back your opponents technique at them at greater damage, if you absorb something how exactly do you hold on to it (consider revision). Also your projectiles need a speed.
All out Attack of the Defence of the Innocent ~ remove the last part about it being able to cut anything, how much damage your opponent receives and whether they are cut or not are determined by advantages.
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Post by Arthur Giles on Jun 19, 2016 19:39:12 GMT
I have made the required changes.
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Post by yume on Jun 20, 2016 22:44:14 GMT
There are details on this profile that is a direct taking from Link. As per site rules, you cannot rip from your face claim or make direct rips of other characters.
Fire Slash of Justice - Master Sword Beam Strike
Awick - Basic Fire Rod Mechanic
Aegis of the Courageous Hero - Mirror Shield or any reflective shield that link has had
All out attack - Depends on how you look at it, can either be Din's Fire or the iconic Charged Spin attack.
His personality and history have too many reference to Zelda titles that I won't go into detail...
The character will need to be redone since this is a blatant rip of Link and his various appearances.
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Post by Arthur Giles on Jun 21, 2016 3:59:40 GMT
I would like to preface this by saying I'm not attempting to rile hostilities I'm simply moving to get you to see my point of view in the originality of these techniques.
Fire Slash of Justice- Firstly, the stipulation that follows this technique cannot be equated to the stipulation required to fire the beam attack from the Legend of Zelda. On the contrary the two attacks are neither the same element, nor the same effect. By equating my ability to the beam slash from the Legend of Zelda, the essential implication is that any projectile based attack that uses a sword as its medium (Ichigo's Getsuga Tenshou for example) are disallowed under the rule of being ripped from another series.
Awick- I was not aware of this, I never played the first Zelda game. I thought it just shot fire.
Aegis of the Courageous Hero- This is just an ability that even your rules allow on this site. The fact I use a shield for it should not hinder this ability.
All Out Attack of the Defender of the Innocent- This ability is more closely related to a bomb then Din's fire. It takes IN fire, not pushes fire outward as Din's Fire does. Unlike the spin attack, he does not spin, and his sword does not release a pulse of magic, it causes an explosion.
My history... Is a One Piece DnD run by my friends. They are literally searching for "the treasure that would make their dreams come true"
Personality- I was trying to be funny, I shall change a few.
In closing, I feel like this should be re-evaluated with a little less Legend of Zelda in mind. If necessary, I can change my face claim if it's that big an issue. If the rules state we are required to have a face claim, I feel like abilities and templates should be based on originality, not on the claim. Like Fire Slash of Justice for example, there are subtle parallels, such as projectiles using the sword, however, a few canon Bleach characters use this ability in some form as well as well as characters in a plethora of other media.
P.S. The fist half of my template disappeared. Do I need to resubmit the first half, or can you guys fix that before I start the edit?
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