Rei Tan [Complete]

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Change is everything -
* First if its not offensive it cant do damage unless you are making a weapon that you are going to stab with [ie bone sword]. [Change passive to Offensive]

* Second, passive means its out of your control. You cant passively 'actively' control fire for example. [As above]

* Third, Max Tier for passives is Tier II at shikai level releases. Your Ress becomes Bankai level at HL with Advanced in the release mastery

* Last your ability wording kinda confused me on the effect. Does that mean you can create an endless amount of arms and stuff? Does that affect healing injuries? What about recovering from burns and stuff? Are you able to just grow more skin? If so you need to refer to the healing guide to adhere to those rules.



In their Sealed form Rei hands[Holds?] two small blades. These blades [are as?] as big as a K-bar. The handle is made up of bone that [come?] comes from Rei's forearm. The bones form around the two blade[s] in a twisted pattern that makes it look like the blade is a flower opening. The blades are both made of steel and extender[extend?] from the base about 7 inches. Both blades are holsters[Have holsters? 'sheaths'] that are attached to her hip.

A True Bonding.

Rei was born in a small town to outside any major citys in Japan. Having bright blue eyes and lovely red hair her parents treasured her since this was their only child they could create. As time was simple on the outskirt town Rei lived a very happy life. The town though was not with out trouble. A band of thugs would visit their town everyday. It was ten years of Rei's life that these thugs would torment this town and it was on this tenth year of her life that the towns people would have enough. It was a blood bath for the towns people. They all fought till the very end but what was left was only the children and a burnt down village. Rei held the only thing that was left of her parents in her hands. The heads of her parents would forever be engraved into her mind. It was at this point that a traveling women would come upon her. The woman took Rei's hand and lead her away. This woman would lead Rei to her new home and Rei would come to know a new life in which revenge was the only thing she thought about.

When Opposites Attract

Rei would soon figure out that the women's name Kanna. Kanna being a skilled assassin would train Rei for many years. Rei would learn how to wield every type of weapon. From a simple knife to a M9.[So the M9 was made in 1980. Your character is over a hundred years old so it wasn't around then. Just a thought.] Rei by the age of 15 was able to use these weapons with get efforteffect. Kanna was surprised at how fast Rei learned everything. Rei had learned everything Kanna had learned in a short amount of time. Kanna would give her a test to see if she was truly ready. Rei would be sent out to get ride of a gang of thugs that had been killing innocent people. She would find out soon that this would be the same band of thugs that attacked her village so many years ago.


The road of Separation

It took Rei a year to track down the thugs that had taken away her parent from her at such a young age. With her will and determination she approached the camp. It was the dead of the night as she ran up and over the wall. The two guards there had no idea what had happened as two well places knife throws got stuck in their throats. They fell down before Rei even touched the ground. She ran towards the first set of buildings and crashed right though the window. She tucked and rolled and placed two well aimed shots into the first guard with her M9. The Three guards that were left rushed her. One grabbing for her throat while the other her waist. They were two slow though, she already had her own Katana out and cut the first ones head clean off. The other was not so luck as she sliced his stomach up. Blood pooled on the floor and over Rei's feet. A slight smile grew across her face as she ran towards the last guy. A bullet landed right between the eyes of the guy his eyes. His eyes had crossed at the last second and then his body hit the ground. Rei then moved to the main room. This is where the boss would be but upon opening the doors she only saw one person. Kanna was in the middle of the room waiting with her Katana out smiling at Rei.



All these years Rei had not been trained as an equal to Kanna but as a replacement or even worse as a challenge that Kanna would want to face at one point. Rei knew at this point that Kanna was the one that caused her family death. Enraged, Rei dashed forward towards Kanna. Her blade was already drawn by the time Rei reached her. The blades clashed over [and over?] each making sparks fly. Rei looks Kanna dead in the eyes. Kanna's long black hair draping over her face and a wild smile grew across Kanna's face. For the first time in many years Rei knew what it was like to be scared again. That is when Rei felt it. Blood started to trickle down the side of her leg. Kanna had stabbed her in the side with a knife. Rei cursed herself for not seeing past this simple trick. Rei retreated as her hand moved over the open wound. This was already not good, Kanna had hit an organ and Rei was bleeding out. Rei quickly pulled her M9 out and shot rapidly. Kanna laughed as she easily deflected the bullets. Rei spat blood on the floor. Rei knew that she had been beat.


Kanna looked over at Rei her sword raised about to Cut her down. "Oh my dear you were no use to me in this life but in the next you might just be of use to me." Kanna cut down Rei. Her head feel to the ground as Kanna left the building. Laughing.