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Post by mitsuoki on Oct 2, 2018 3:08:14 GMT
GENERAL IMPROVEMENT
Improvement of What?: Technique - Bakudō #30, Shallow Grave Thread Links: N/A Link to Approved Technique: Link Reason: Plot Points - 60
[b]Bakudō Name[/b]: Bakudō #30, Shallow Grave [b]Class[/b]: Kidō [b]Tier[/b]: III [b]Type[/b]: Defensive [b]Range[/b]: ~2 meters [b]Duration[/b]: Up to 5 Posts [b]Incantation[/b]: "Surrounded by silence, consumed by darkness, delving in despair; mask the world from those in your arms, and mask them from the world." [b]Description[/b]: This technique creates a six-foot cube around a single point, either Mitsuoki or a different target. This cube is resistant to some attacks, but can be easily shattered by stronger ones. The cube causes light to go directly through it, rather than being reflected or absorbed, to make it invisible. Those walking towards it will instinctively walk around it without giving the action a second thought. It seals the spirit pressure and scent of those within its confines, making it extremely difficult to find them. The cube will not be destroyed if those inside it speak, but doing so will very easily give away their position. Attacks cannot be used from within the cube.
Improvement of What?: Technique - Bakudo #61 Rikujōkōrō (Six Rods Prison of Light) Thread Links: N/A Link to Approved Technique: Link Reason: Plot Points - 140
[b]Name[/b]: Bakudo #61 Rikujōkōrō (Six Rods Prison of Light) [b]Class[/b]: Kido [b]Type[/b]: Binding [b]Tier[/b]: V [b]Range[/b]: 30 Meters [b]Incantation[/b]: Carriage of Thunder. Bridge of a spinning wheel. With light, divide this into six! [b]Description[/b]: Summons six thin, but wide, beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 11, 2018 0:35:19 GMT
Mkay there seems to be some confusion here, before I grade this I’ll ask that you remove the weekly post thing you have at the bottom, usually those are submitted in plot improvement or pm’d directly to staff [since our post thing is a little iffy] and not here.
Once you do that we can get this approved. [there’s nothing i see wrong with aside from you including the plot improvement thing]
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Post by mitsuoki on Oct 11, 2018 2:38:42 GMT
Mkay there seems to be some confusion here, before I grade this I’ll ask that you remove the weekly post thing you have at the bottom, usually those are submitted in plot improvement or pm’d directly to staff [since our post thing is a little iffy] and not here. I PM'd it to youOnce you do that we can get this approved. [there’s nothing i see wrong with aside from you including the plot improvement thing]
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Post by Deleted on Oct 11, 2018 14:04:48 GMT
approved.
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