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Post by Cagliostro Degli Antichi on Jun 14, 2017 11:58:11 GMT
Name: Judicii (Judgement)
Class: Resureccion
Tier: III
Type: Supplementary
Range: Max. 100 meters
Description: Used to fire a projectile or energy based technique three times. Rather than Cagliostro casting her techniques, the three monoliths each fire a copy of the selected technique, tripling the damage output, or in case of defensive shielding, projecting not one, but three shields. This technique suffers no cooldown, but the utilised attack suffers triple the regular cooldown. These techniques go up to tier V maximum. |
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Post by Cagliostro Degli Antichi on Jun 14, 2017 11:59:12 GMT
[b]Name:[/b] Judicii (Judgement)
[b]Class:[/b] Resureccion
[b]Tier:[/b] III
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Max. 100 meters
[b]Description:[/b] Used to fire a projectile or energy based technique three times. Rather than Cagliostro casting her techniques, the three monoliths each fire a copy of the selected technique, tripling the damage output, or in case of defensive shielding, projecting not one, but three shields. This technique suffers no cooldown, but the utilised attack suffers triple the regular cooldown. These techniques go up to tier V maximum.[/b]
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Post by BM on Jun 17, 2017 2:03:09 GMT
As per the rules, the tech must state it cannot be used for tiers VI and VII, and you are limited to 3 attacks at once for tier V. Also, since you are using the ability and the towers are firing their own version, that would be a total of 4 techniques (for tier IV) so the cooldown would be 4x not 3x.
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Post by Cagliostro Degli Antichi on Jun 17, 2017 7:51:08 GMT
Updated to fit the criteria. She shoots three projectiles, all three from the monoliths behind her, rather than four. Sorry if that was unclear. Re-wrote it to properly state that.
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Post by Marcia on Jun 20, 2017 11:58:40 GMT
I know this sounds super nitpicky but it's not immediately clear what this technique does; you've written the mechanics without initially actually stating its purpose. For clarity's sake can you just add a bit at the very beginning like "this can be used to shoot three copies of a chosen attack". Also, what are the directions; do they all go the same way, or can they be launched in different directions?
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Post by Cagliostro Degli Antichi on Jun 20, 2017 12:22:51 GMT
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Post by Marcia on Jun 21, 2017 22:16:28 GMT
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