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Post by Satoshi on May 11, 2017 12:50:09 GMT
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EDITS REQUESTED: There is two things that I'm hoping for, one of them is an accident between me and the Moderators.
A. My previous Reiatsu passive has been approved to be replaced by my new one, right here
B. Also, I think there was some kind of misunderstanding about my shikai, but I had it tweaked to match the AoE drop-off rules, but I had it in the same thread at the Zan-Edit. My old reiatsu passive "Smother Decree" has been replaced as my 4th Shikai ability for some reason, even though its listed in my profile as my Reiatsu passive as well
In summary: Since I can't prove what my previous shikai ability was, Im hoping that I can just get it removed so I can make a 4th one, and replace my former Reiatsu passive with my new one.
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Post by Marcia on May 11, 2017 15:08:06 GMT
So, edit 1 is replacing rei passive with new one. That's fine, can dot hat.
Edit 2... So they put your old rei passive instead of your 4th shikai ability? Can you please give me the link to the improv where this happened?
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Post by Satoshi on May 11, 2017 16:49:00 GMT
Well, I was ignorant and pasted my 4th ability when I tweaked it, and then put the Reiatsu passive (spaced out) to indicate it was seperate, but Jade took it as the 4th ability. Technically it was my fault but i'm hoping to fix it up, I apologize for the inconvenience. This link has my old (messy) profile, which contains the real 4th ability of my Shikai called "Ionic revolution" . My Vizard profile used to have it but it got copied over. Name: Raion Kakumei (Ionic Revolution) Type: Passive/Supplementary Tier: I Class: Shikai Technique Range: Self Description: Satoshi applies a variety of ions to his body whenever he so chooses (meaning he can apply this effect on and off at will with a one post prep for it to come off, and off.) and when he does this, he officially becomes "Energized." What this means is, the character has elongated stamina, and he may increase to full speed instantly with no required momentum building. Usually when you start sprinting, or dodge objects, there is a point where you move slow, then get faster quickly or tediously whatever the case may be. Satoshi being "Energized" means he does not have to wait for this to happen, and the point from him being still to full speed is non-existent. For example, if an enemy tries to send a kick at him, his fist doesn't start out slow then get fast very quickly to block, his fist instantly goes into full speed. And say Satoshi wants to sprint toward an enemy. There is no point where Satoshi runs and gains momentum to get to full speed, he runs and instantly reaches full speed. There are no repercussions for getting from no movement to full speed with no lag. THIS is the link you asked for. {New Reiatsu Passive}Name: Thanatos Gaze Class: Reitsu control Tier: Tier III Type: Passive Range: 80 meters Descriptions: Satoshi's mind is able to paint a mental picture within 80 meters of himself, the space around him becomine in-tune with his reiatsu, and thus with the space is one with his mind. The area around becomes a picture of different fibrations and frequences, movement and objects changing and disrupting this flow in different patterns. Approved link: bleachsociety-rp.boards.net/thread/3449/changing?page=1&scrollTo=21314 |
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Post by Marcia on May 12, 2017 16:33:11 GMT
Firstly, for the love of god man stop adding like 5 spaces between each damn line, it's no wonder Jade got confused, this shit is impossible to read.
Wait hang on hang on. You haven't linked me an approved improvement board thread for these. You have to go through the improv board to show that you can get it added to your character. Can't just get the techs approved and then added from there.
You need to specifically state in the improv thread why your release techniques needed changing, giving details of each change made. You can't just use the systems changing as an excuse for a free chance to edit a locked release.
You are able to prove what your previous shikai ability was since it's right there on your old profile.
Your new Rei Passive you will need to buy with points. Any shikai techs that need upgrading to the new rules you get for free. Either way you need to post a request for character improvement in the improv board.
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