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Post by JAMES CLARK on Apr 22, 2017 2:40:35 GMT
Name: Mazerunner Class: Reiryoku Techniques Tier: II Type: Supplementary Range: 50 meters Description: The user is able to use any lingering reiatsu in the surrounding vicinity in addition to molding their own reiryoku along with it to produce transparent force fields 5 feet high, 5 feet wide. Before a force-field is formed, a distortion of light appears in the place where the force-field will form at bala speed. The force-fields are charged to repulse anything that doesn't have the user's reiatsu signature in a set direction. Each wall has a certain flow of energy so that when the target is repulsed by it, it gets pushed away in a certain direction at bala speed. The push is akin to travelling on a conveyor belt at bala speed. When a target is pushed away it is abrupt and if pushed in a certain direction than the target was originally going, they are pushed at a sharp 90 degree angle. The force fields can be destroyed with tier II strength however the user of the technique can bounce projectiles off the flow of energy or create gaps in them for projectiles to be shot through. An unlimited number of force-fields can be created but after 4 posts each individual force-field becomes visible.
{Flow of Energy}Because differing force-fields have a different flow of energy assigned to them when the force-field becomes visible they will have a different color.
Red- flowing to the target's right Blue- flowing to the target's left Black- flowing in the direction directly behind the target White- flowing in the direction the target was originally going Name: Bloodlust Skyfall Class: Reiryoku Techniques Tier: II Type: Offensive Range: 25 meter radius Description: James gathers energy into the palm of his hand before launching a shot of red light high into the sky which explodes leaving red shards of energy to rain down on the surrounding area. These shards number in the thousands and appear as thin as acupuncture needles. These needles are controlled by James's will and can be honed in on any target within range that he can see or sense, each shard acting according to tier II capabilities. However the shards also have a will of their own and hone in on open wounds and bleeding wounds, working in tandem with the user's focus, requiring less focus on the part of the user once the blood requirement is fulfilled. For any small trace amount of blood as such from a small scratch or otherwise, anywhere from 1 to 50 blood-lust shards will go charging at bala speed, only increasing upwards in number with larger wounds and more blood present. The shards are serrated and barbed so removal simply makes blood clotting even harder thus resulting in a bloody mess simply attracting more shards. In addition to this, the shards increase in ferocity over time with the damage they deal increasing exponentially every other post (tier II on first post, next post, tier II x 2 on third post, next post, tier II x 3 on fourth post, etc.) to a max of tier II x 5. The user of this ability is immune to the raining destruction and the shards will never lock onto the blood of the user's reiatsu signature. This post lasts 8 posts before it must be recast. Name: Banshee Rounds Class: Weapon Skill Techniques Tier: I Type: Offensive / Supplementary Range: 75 meter diameter effective range / 5 meter radius (fall off effectiveness the farther away) Description: By first hardening minute amounts of their reiatsu into a physical form, the user can effortlessly create bullets for use in rifles. By then vibrating the reiatsu particles that comprise these 5.56mm rounds, the user can emit a loud high-pitched screeching noise that acts on the inner ear from the bullets at a 5 meter radius surrounding the bullet itself. This attack on the inner ear causes disorientation, loss of balance, and wobbly vision. The screech increases in intensity the closer the bullet gets to the ear and with sustained exposure can cause impaired motor functions and deafness if continually exposed for around 10 posts. The user is able to negate the screeching effect on their own body by naturally dispelling the reiatsu within their vicinity. Each shot fires at bala speed. Name: Tracker's Delight Class: Reiryoku Techniques Tier: II Type: Offensive / Supplementary Range: 75 meter diameter effective range / 10 meter radius (fall off effectiveness the farther away) Description: The user can utilize this technique on any ammo they carry / bullets or projectiles they fire. After the user fires the shot, the a faux-shell casing is made of reiatsu as well which remains where the bullet is stopped at. The user can naturally lock on to the reiatsu signature of the casing and to only the user's eyes do they emit a 5 foot diameter blue pulsing beacon of light on the ground around the shell's casing. These tracker's rounds can function as deployable scanners, with the beacons of light able to notify the user telepathically of any movement within a 10 meter radius of the shell by presenting foreign reiatsu signatures as a black-inky residue that corrupts the blue light. The readings get more accurate and specific the closer the target that is being tracked is to the center going from murky and blurry depictions going to more outlined and detailed sketches of the layout. Alternatively, these rounds can be used as distractions or bait if the user chooses to concentrate his reiatsu around their radius, luring or throwing people off his own trail.
Name: Sharkskin Rounds Class: Weapon Skill Techniques Tier: I Type: Offensive / Supplementary Range: 75 meter diameter effective range / 5 meter radius (fall off effectiveness the farther away) Description: By first hardening minute amounts of their reiatsu into a physical form, the user can effortlessly create bullets for use in rifles. The user then condenses several other layers of reiatsu around the initial bullet, forming an interwoven layer of small barb-tipped scales that when they make contact will shed and shave away they touch. They have the standard piercing properties of any other bullet but with the added benefit of additional internal bleeding, being lodged and stuck within the target because of the barbs. Alternatively, because these rounds by default are akin to 5.56mm rifle rounds, they are around 2 inches in length and can their shells, if they miss their target and are scattered about the battlefield, can act as caltrops of sorts. Each shot fires at bala speed.
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Post by Marcia on Apr 24, 2017 13:11:09 GMT
A Terrible Thing To Waste Just about everything about this tech is denied. So much so that I'm not even going to recommend fixes, since the very principle behind the tech is denied. If you want a reason its "combat telepathy" and "ability sealing".
Bloodlust Skyfall Note that you can't have automatic homing techs, you will need to concentrate and guide them.
Banshee Rounds No tier I technique is able to permanently impair anything, not even with 10 posts exposure.
Tracker's Delight This... Isn't really a weapon skill technique. For a start they can't be self-aware anything, or do passive things. You get to have them emit a light only to your eyes and that's pretty much it. All the stuff in the last paragraph has to go. Put it in a separate tech.
In general tier I and tier II techniques are... Not supposed to be particularly complicated (unless they're passives and even then).
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Post by JAMES CLARK on Apr 25, 2017 6:36:14 GMT
terrible thing: removed bloodlust skyfall: adjusted hopefully to your liking banshee: adjusted tracker's: tech class changed, and tech description modified
- added a tech (sharkskin rounds)
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Post by Marcia on Apr 25, 2017 16:38:06 GMT
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