Post by Remi D'Aubigné on May 12, 2016 3:47:30 GMT
Name: Alnta Lupaiz God Breaker: All Things Made Equal
Class: Fullbring
Tier: III-VII
Charm:
Type: Binding/Illusion
Range: Self to Short (0-4m)
Description: She should have drawn Alnta Lupaiz: The All Decoder. She should have gained the ability to decrypt any hidden message. She should have gained the power to understand all languages, to wash away all falsehood by "tapping out" truth. But when she invoked the charm for Alnta Lupaiz, she drew forth a black hammer. Upon impact, the hammer creates forces which distort and shear, voiding what is touched from existence. As all things are made equal in nothingness, all aspects of the material, its past, its present, and its future are completely expunged. Reality responds to this by reorganizing space accordingly. For example, if a door is erased, the fabric of reality fills in the missing void left in its place with something that should logically follow, such as a portion of the corresponding wall. Parts of a subject can be targeted for erasure, as well as certain aspects such as the sound an object makes, or even the heat of a flame. Against actual, living creatures, God Breaker will allow one to void parts of the body that are touched, such as the arms and legs, and can even target specifics like bone and muscle. At Tier VI and up, The range of the hammer's ability can be increased through the emanation of the violet energy sealed within it.
Remi can wield God Breaker as a standard weapon and may choose when it's ability becomes active, even long after she has struck something. Finally, God Breaker's power is enough to allow it to act upon objects with a deep connection to individuals such as Zanpaktou, but it cannot completely erase these objects from existence. It can, however, ebb away at core aspects of that object as she can perceive them, such as erasing the sharpness of a sword's edge, or erasing a segment of something as large as the diameter of God Breaker's head, or scaled down depending on the size of the target. And of course, this ability is weighed against advantages and calculated normality. Erasure is temporary, only lasting for five posts in the case of the inanimate, or three for subjects.with sentience. It will also end when Remi deactivates her fullbring or is incapacitated.
Name: Vanu Voxnia: Vainglorious, Transfixed In Twilight
Class: Fullbring
Tier: III-VII
Charm:
Type: Binding
Range: Self to Long Range (0m using the hammer, up to 50m using Press-On Pellet Nails)
Description: Vanu Voxnia takes its namesake from the legendary artisan first appearing in Chapter 35 of the manga, and was one of the main antagonists in the Moving Pictures story arc. With Vanu Voxnia, Remi gains The Vainglorious Vixen's signature ability, utilizing it in the same way Lupi did after he sealed her Mindspark within a charm. Striking something with the hammer drives a nail into it instantaneously. The nail doesn't damage the subject in the slightest. Instead, it incorporates itself into the target and fuses with it entirely, becoming for all intents and purposes, a part of it. That which is fused with the nails is effectively placed a quarter-step outside of reality. This displacement subjects the object to conditions similar to that of the Negación fields created by Gillian-Class Hollows, while simultaneously transfixing it and placing it in stasis. A failing object struck, for example, will halt in midair. Because it is literally "pinned" within the moment, it becomes virtually unmovable. Because it is a quarter-step outside of reality, the object's status is "nailed in place." It becomes virtually unchangeable and virtually indestructible. At full power, The nail can pin a target down to the point where every aspect of it is frozen in place, even molecular activity. Objects linked to the soul such as a Zanpakutō, as well as items created through item creation are resistant to its effects. Vanu Voxnia's effects only last two posts before the nail harmlessly dissolves.
Name: Maxiotias: The War God's Squelching Blow
Class: Fullbring
Tier: III-VII
Charm:
Type: Defensive
Range: Self to Long Range (0-200m)
Description: Maxiotias, was bound by fate to take his place in the pantheon as The God of War and Competition. Known for his youthful, handsome appearance, and the quiet intensity of his fury and resolve, he was worshiped and called upon for strength in combat, calmness, and clarity in battle, and protection from one's enemies. Lupi befriended The Wistful Warmonger after defeating him a thumb wrestling match to the death. He gave Lupi a shard of his Mindspark, and his blessing. The War God's Squelching Blow personifies his hidden desire to protect creation instead. Striking objects with the hammer robs them of their rigidness, making them soft like mush, as well as becoming incredibly malleable and elastic. Objects "mush-o-fied" embody elasticity on a conceptual level, using it as a defensive measure against whatever force it encounters that seeks to damage or impede it as things tend to "bounce off." Like actual rubber, kinetic forces build upon impact, stretching and deforming until it snaps back in place violently, dealing damage to whatever it strikes. This ability's effect can be delayed or made dormant, and at any point, objects can be reverted to their former state. Tier determines durability and damage potential regarding transmuted objects. Objects linked to the soul such as a Zanpakutō, as well as items created through item creation are also resistant to its effects. Maxiotias post duration is determined by the standard tier chart.
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You're completely right. I tried to tone it down. The flavor text was to help me remember aspects of the lore I had, but it would interfere with people understanding. My apologies.
That aside, I reworked things a bit from how they were and tried to be more clear.
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Class: Fullbring
Tier: III-VII
Charm:
Type: Binding/Illusion
Range: Self to Short (0-4m)
Description: She should have drawn Alnta Lupaiz: The All Decoder. She should have gained the ability to decrypt any hidden message. She should have gained the power to understand all languages, to wash away all falsehood by "tapping out" truth. But when she invoked the charm for Alnta Lupaiz, she drew forth a black hammer. Upon impact, the hammer creates forces which distort and shear, voiding what is touched from existence. As all things are made equal in nothingness, all aspects of the material, its past, its present, and its future are completely expunged. Reality responds to this by reorganizing space accordingly. For example, if a door is erased, the fabric of reality fills in the missing void left in its place with something that should logically follow, such as a portion of the corresponding wall. Parts of a subject can be targeted for erasure, as well as certain aspects such as the sound an object makes, or even the heat of a flame. Against actual, living creatures, God Breaker will allow one to void parts of the body that are touched, such as the arms and legs, and can even target specifics like bone and muscle. At Tier VI and up, The range of the hammer's ability can be increased through the emanation of the violet energy sealed within it.
Remi can wield God Breaker as a standard weapon and may choose when it's ability becomes active, even long after she has struck something. Finally, God Breaker's power is enough to allow it to act upon objects with a deep connection to individuals such as Zanpaktou, but it cannot completely erase these objects from existence. It can, however, ebb away at core aspects of that object as she can perceive them, such as erasing the sharpness of a sword's edge, or erasing a segment of something as large as the diameter of God Breaker's head, or scaled down depending on the size of the target. And of course, this ability is weighed against advantages and calculated normality. Erasure is temporary, only lasting for five posts in the case of the inanimate, or three for subjects.with sentience. It will also end when Remi deactivates her fullbring or is incapacitated.
*God Breaker allows her to cloak the presence of herself and others, but if they should use techniques, or begin an attack, erasure is automatically lifted.
*God Breaker cannot erase the sound of stepping techniques
*Against Spirit Weapons, each advantage allows God Breaker to dull those weapons by one sharpness level
*God Breaker cannot erase the sound of stepping techniques
*Against Spirit Weapons, each advantage allows God Breaker to dull those weapons by one sharpness level
Name: Vanu Voxnia: Vainglorious, Transfixed In Twilight
Class: Fullbring
Tier: III-VII
Charm:
Type: Binding
Range: Self to Long Range (0m using the hammer, up to 50m using Press-On Pellet Nails)
Description: Vanu Voxnia takes its namesake from the legendary artisan first appearing in Chapter 35 of the manga, and was one of the main antagonists in the Moving Pictures story arc. With Vanu Voxnia, Remi gains The Vainglorious Vixen's signature ability, utilizing it in the same way Lupi did after he sealed her Mindspark within a charm. Striking something with the hammer drives a nail into it instantaneously. The nail doesn't damage the subject in the slightest. Instead, it incorporates itself into the target and fuses with it entirely, becoming for all intents and purposes, a part of it. That which is fused with the nails is effectively placed a quarter-step outside of reality. This displacement subjects the object to conditions similar to that of the Negación fields created by Gillian-Class Hollows, while simultaneously transfixing it and placing it in stasis. A failing object struck, for example, will halt in midair. Because it is literally "pinned" within the moment, it becomes virtually unmovable. Because it is a quarter-step outside of reality, the object's status is "nailed in place." It becomes virtually unchangeable and virtually indestructible. At full power, The nail can pin a target down to the point where every aspect of it is frozen in place, even molecular activity. Objects linked to the soul such as a Zanpakutō, as well as items created through item creation are resistant to its effects. Vanu Voxnia's effects only last two posts before the nail harmlessly dissolves.
- Press-On Pellet Nails: Remi's nails can also be converted into these peculiar nails, shot out at Cero speed, and then regrown at no harm to herself. With this aspect, nails with strength up to Tier IV may be used as projectiles to increase Vanu Voxnia's range. However, fusing things with these nails allows more precision with the effects of Vanu Voxnia, letting her target smaller points like fingers much easier, and or apply a single aspect of the nail's power (i.e., immobilization without increasing durability) instead of all of the typical effects at once. The nail's power only lasts for a single post. This ability takes up one Technique Slot.
Name: Maxiotias: The War God's Squelching Blow
Class: Fullbring
Tier: III-VII
Charm:
Type: Defensive
Range: Self to Long Range (0-200m)
Description: Maxiotias, was bound by fate to take his place in the pantheon as The God of War and Competition. Known for his youthful, handsome appearance, and the quiet intensity of his fury and resolve, he was worshiped and called upon for strength in combat, calmness, and clarity in battle, and protection from one's enemies. Lupi befriended The Wistful Warmonger after defeating him a thumb wrestling match to the death. He gave Lupi a shard of his Mindspark, and his blessing. The War God's Squelching Blow personifies his hidden desire to protect creation instead. Striking objects with the hammer robs them of their rigidness, making them soft like mush, as well as becoming incredibly malleable and elastic. Objects "mush-o-fied" embody elasticity on a conceptual level, using it as a defensive measure against whatever force it encounters that seeks to damage or impede it as things tend to "bounce off." Like actual rubber, kinetic forces build upon impact, stretching and deforming until it snaps back in place violently, dealing damage to whatever it strikes. This ability's effect can be delayed or made dormant, and at any point, objects can be reverted to their former state. Tier determines durability and damage potential regarding transmuted objects. Objects linked to the soul such as a Zanpakutō, as well as items created through item creation are also resistant to its effects. Maxiotias post duration is determined by the standard tier chart.
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You're completely right. I tried to tone it down. The flavor text was to help me remember aspects of the lore I had, but it would interfere with people understanding. My apologies.
That aside, I reworked things a bit from how they were and tried to be more clear.