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Post by Aoi Sora on Mar 28, 2016 14:18:52 GMT
Name: Hadō #31 Shakkahō (Shot of Red Fire) Class: Kido Tier: III Type: Offensive Range: Medium (30m) Incantation: Ye Lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, The sea barrier surges, March on to the south! Description: Fires a ball of red energy the size a head a x5 Cero Speed at a target.
Name: Hadō #33 Sōkatsui (Blue Fire, Crash Down) Class: Kido Tier: III Type: Offensive Range: Long (70m) Incantation: Ye Lord! Mask of flesh and bone, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Truth and temperance, Upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws! Description: Fires a burst of blue spiritual energy at a target in a similar manner to Shakkahō at x10 Cero Speed, but over a wider area and with more power.
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Post by Fuhrer-senpai on Mar 29, 2016 23:43:28 GMT
Second Post The first of two issues I have is the way you describe what happens when he shoots the Shakkahou into the air. When a technique reaches its maximum range, it doesn't turn around and come back, it would fizzle out as it got there. You could make it that the technique exploded mid air and he had to dodge some of the falling residue, but the attack itself wouldn't fall backwards.
Seventh Post Incantless kidou is difficult to learn, and you have him able to master it on the first try. If it was a weaker kidou, I'd probably let this go, but considering you're learning how to perform the kidou, taking 20+ times with its incant to get it right, then able to suddenly turn around and cast it without its incant out the gate is a bit implausible. Give me a bit of trial and error here, like you did learning Shakkahou's incant.
Twofold Incantation Twofold incantation is something you get when your kidou mastery is at advanced, and Aoi's is only at above average, so this will have to go, unfortunately. You can change it that he is able to cast both kidou without their incants back to back (again, I'd like to see some trial and error leading up to it however), if you'd like to replace it with something else.
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Post by Aoi Sora on Mar 30, 2016 4:50:03 GMT
Second Post The first of two issues I have is the way you describe what happens when he shoots the Shakkahou into the air. When a technique reaches its maximum range, it doesn't turn around and come back, it would fizzle out as it got there. You could make it that the technique exploded mid air and he had to dodge some of the falling residue, but the attack itself wouldn't fall backwards.
The technique never reached its maximum range going up, that why it comes back down. I did say it was short on power if that makes any sense but to make it clearer I just put in that it only went up half its distance which would explain why it would not fizzle out and still relates to the lack of power behind it as well
Seventh Post Incantless kidou is difficult to learn, and you have him able to master it on the first try. If it was a weaker kidou, I'd probably let this go, but considering you're learning how to perform the kidou, taking 20+ times with its incant to get it right, then able to suddenly turn around and cast it without its incant out the gate is a bit implausible. Give me a bit of trial and error here, like you did learning Shakkahou's incant.
I need to post this in the face of someone who said I should have been able to learn a million kido's with this thread lols but anyways I realised I did not do much other than eat in my Sixth post so I will edit that one to include some period of time, but its never really clear how long it takes to mastered no incantation Anyways adding several days or more with a vague duration since giving exact number of days would just be on and off if that makes sense Though I do already have the no incantation skill itself being a member of the kidoshu
Twofold Incantation Twofold incantation is something you get when your kidou mastery is at advanced, and Aoi's is only at above average, so this will have to go, unfortunately. You can change it that he is able to cast both kidou without their incants back to back (again, I'd like to see some trial and error leading up to it however), if you'd like to replace it with something else.
That is why I had the massive failed cast, he was attempting it his not learning it yet... only thing his learning are the two kido and how to use kido better in general
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Post by Pika on Apr 1, 2016 20:05:51 GMT
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