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Post by Satoshi on Feb 28, 2016 19:56:55 GMT
Name: Scoilt Na Spéartha (Split the Heavens) Class: Weapon Skill:Zanjutsu/iiajutsu Tier: II-IV Type: Defensive Range: Close range, 10 feet extension of blade. Description: This ability allows Satoshi to literally split through his attacks, based on advantages. When Satoshi chooses to use this ability, he pulls back his blade with either hand, blade pointing frontwards. After he is finished pulling it back, he crouches down at a slant as he goes forward with the blade and his arm. As he does this, his body is extended, arm sticking out, and the long blade now splitting the oncoming technique into 2, going to either side of him, or atop him if he so chooses. If equally advantaged, it will split the attack but push his sword and body slightly backward. If it is 1 advantage over, it will split the ability in half and only push his sword out of the way. 2+ And the Ability is sliced like butter with ease, no signs of struggle or pushing.
Name: Tsubame (3 post duration 6 post cooldown) Class: Weapon Skill: Zanjutsu/Reiryoku Tier: Tier III Type: Offensive/Supplementary Range: 50 meters
Description: An extension of Satoshi's already long Odachi comes off of the blade, as if it was part of the blade itself. However, the blade is extremely transparent, so at higher speeds it may appear almost impossible to see.The extension itself is 50 meters, and reaches out at Half-bala speeds.
Name: Seiden hōden (Static Discharge) Class: Reiryoku Technique Tier: Tier II-III Type: Offensive/Stun Range: 25m Description: The user focuses his Reiatsu into a plasma form through instant focus of energy. The user has to warp their own Reiryoku in order to create this plasma. This can be shot from any point of the body, or the weapon of the user. When focused, a branched out, but generally straight line of electricity is shot. Anything hit by this will be caught in a stun. (You can find the advantages of this in the Advantage syste thread)
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Post by BM on Mar 2, 2016 19:09:06 GMT
Scoilt Na Spéartha - I feel there is a word missing from the first sentence of this description.
Tsubame - I'm a bit confused, is this a 50m extension of the weapon? Also regardless you can't have something like this be invisible. And if it is that long you need to put a speed for how fast this extension forms.
Seiden hōden - Um you can't force your opponent to use techniques, which from the worded is what it seems this tech does.
Hadō #54 Haien - Why is this here? You don't need to submit canon techs from the tech lists for approval.
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Post by BM on Mar 14, 2016 19:14:42 GMT
Tsubame - Again, "seeming invisible" is still invisible. I'm fine with it being clear like glass or similar, but you need to remove the mention of invisibility.
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Post by Satoshi on Mar 16, 2016 2:34:52 GMT
Invisibility isn't against the rules, just "harshly" graded. I'd hardly call that technique something to be harsh about, but alright.
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Post by BM on Mar 25, 2016 4:14:02 GMT
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