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Post by chernobyl raion on May 20, 2016 1:38:07 GMT
| | CHERNOBYL RAION | | Who am I? Your worst nightmare. | the black bird || unknown || asexual || unclassified
unknown || n/a || two hundred and fifty |
APPEARANCE
A standard, monstrous raven. She has a white colored cape and stands at a monstrous 8'0" with a 20 ft. wingspan.
PERSONALITY
an unclassified hollow, chernobyl is no different than your standard run-of-the-mill hollow... except for some stark differences. throughout their life, they were told again and again that they generated fear in the Hollow around them. overcome with fear that was directed at the hollow around her, over time chernobyl began to control her fear and use it to push away those she was afraid of. on the outside she began to grow a reputation for this act, but on the inside chernobyl is still a very fearful predator. despite this, she relishes in generating as much fear in those around her as possible and finds the most delectable souls to be those that she preys upon after she has toyed with their psyche. for the time being this is all chernobyl is, though over time she just might develop past her fearful naivete.
HISTORY
if chernobyl had been born alone, they surely would have died ages ago. their last name of raion belonged to the head of their ravenous flock, though chernobyl was born special. they were born with a monstrous height and lengthy wingspan. despite being a rather large hollow, and their hunger controlling their actions day after day, chernobyl was a meek sort who did not wish for anyone around them to be harmed. they weren't overtly protective and were forced to watch many of their flock die as stronger hollow came along and took bites out of them. it was tantamount to suffering, but there was nothing they could do about it. raion kept the flock as protected as they possibly could, but each bird was forced out of the nest eventually... all but chernobyl. raion knew chernobyl was not ready to leave the group and would watch over them for the many years to come. as raion grew in power themselves and evolved into an arrancar, they would lead their flock out to the human world and allow them to ingest in souls, not realizing how this might have affected a greater balance or the black clad individuals who attempted to strike them down.
over time raion would begin to teach their children what these figures were. shinigami, a word that still rings oddly within chernobyl's ears to this day. why were shinigami bad men and women? why did they try to hunt down the flock? chernobyl didn't understand it, yet their mind that was more advanced than those around in the flock tortured them due to their curiosity. they were found crying numerous times by raion, and though they tried to clear up the young chernobyl's mind ultimately they failed. instead, they realized chernobyl was fearful and took them out to learn how to use their unique powers granted to them. raion taught chernobyl how to control their fear, how to mold it to their own purpose, but in doing so raion also unlocked a hidden piece of chernobyl's personality. something that was locked deep away due to her meek and nervous nature. chernobyl found that they enjoyed seeing the frightened faces of those around them, and would even look upon their flock with a kind of twisted sadism that was properly accredited to hollow. raion noticed this and decided that it was time for chernobyl to leave her flock. instead, they had a better idea.
a far worse idea. chernobyl tortured their flock for days as they pricked and scratched at each layer of their small, inferior minds. when the hollow around her were nearly driven insane, they would feast upon them. many times raion would find chernobyl's beak dripping with blood and though they attempted to strike chernobyl down, they didn't have it in them. with a heavy heart, raion cast chernobyl out and forced her to leave once the entire flock had been decimated. chernobyl was stricken with regret but it was washed away upon the white sands of hueco mundo, and over the years chernobyl would gain a reputation not only within hueco mundo but in the living world as well as "the black bird" from those spiritually aware due to their size and intimidating nature. what raion was not aware of was that chernobyl was still young, and so they ended up keeping watch over the bird during many of their encounters with shinigami and plus souls. chernobyl believed they were surviving on their own power, but it was raion who was the silent guardian of the black bird. they were the one in the shadows who fanned the flames of her reputation, believing that if people were made to fear chernobyl they would never be under a threat of death.
and what of nowadays? nowadays, the unclassified bird continues to terrorize the living world as well as hueco mundo, but some hollow have come across them hidden within a cave, tears falling down those reddened eyes. as the days go on, so too does their mind begin to grow and their perception of the world around them alongside it. chernobyl falls into a listless sleep every night but is always gently pet and nurtured by raion, the arrancar disappearing into the night before chernobyl is able to awaken. though they yearn heavily for companionship, and deep down do wish for those around them to no longer be afraid, they realize they cannot go against their maddening hunger nor their desire to scare others. this is not an innocent prankster attempting to play tricks on people, this is a hollow, a beast, a monster, a giant who, despite the hollow hole in their chest that is covered by a red gem, feels the pain and yearning of a nonexistent heart.
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Post by chernobyl raion on May 20, 2016 2:13:49 GMT
| LIST Name: Aterrrar (Terrify)
Class: Hollow Technique
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Tier: II
Description: Hollows represent the bane of comfort. Monstrous, loathsome, and vicious, hollows strike fear into pluses and shinigami alike. This technique capitalizes on the fear hollows create and takes it one step further. By emanating their dread reiatsu, some hollows can cause opponents of equal advantage or lower to be momentarily frozen in fear. The reiatsu emanated actually curls around their bodies like unseen manacles for about the same time as the shinigami kidou equivalent, Sai.
Name: Repulsión (repulse)
Class: Hollow Technique
Type: Offensive
Range: 100 Meters
Tier: III
Description: Thrusting a limb toward the target, it sends a force of suppressed reiatsu that pushes the target back.
Name: Ensombreza Cobija (Shadow Blanket)
Class: Hollow Technique
Type: Defensive/Binding
Range: 25 meters/Self
Tier: III
Description: The user shoots reiryoku into their own shadow, pulling it up around them like a thick, dark, slightly transparent blanket, hence the name. This is among the absolute fastest of all Hollow techniques in execution speed, being used for a last minute defense against fast attacks, such as Bala. One of the only weaknesses of this technique is that while the user is shielded with their own shadow, so too are they incapable of moving, until the shield is broken or dissipated by the user. The user is also capable of using this shadowy cover to trap an opponent at half bala speeds, using the target's shadow. The shadow can only rise up 7 feet from the ground to engulf either the user or the target, however once it comes in contact with what it is meant to cover, it can stretch over even the largest Gillian.
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BATTLE SKILLS
Name: Class: Tier: Type: Range:Description:Name: Class: Tier: Type: Range:Description:Name: Class: Tier: Type: Range:Description:Name: Class: Tier: Type: Range:Description:Name: Bala (Hollow Bullet)
Class: Cero/Bala
Type: Offensive
Range: 100 Meters
Tier: I
Description: A weaker but quicker alternative to regular Cero blasts. The technique hardens the user's spiritual pressure and fires it at around twenty times the speed of a Cero.
- Default ability for Arrancar and Adjuchas Hollow
Name: Cero (Hollow Flash) (remove if not at least Gillian class Hollow)
Class: Cero/Bala
Type: Offensive
Range: 100 Meters
Tier: IV
Description: Are high-powered energy blasts that can be fired from various places on the body. Only Menos, Arrancar, and Vizard have so far been shown to use Cero attacks, and it appears that stronger entities can use it more efficiently.
- Default ability for Arrancar and Adjuchas/Gillian Hollow
ITEMS N/A REIATSU FEATURES jet black and invokes a sensation of death and fear given form. HOLLOW POWERS |
MIEDO FEAR DARKNESS CONSUME YOU |  |
HOLLOW POWERS ABILITIES
Name: the black bird Class: hollow powers Tier: i Type: illusion/passive Range: 100m Description: the black bird is the hollow power that has garnered chernobyl's reputation over the years. any who look upon chernobyl's monstrous form are overcome with a severe feeling of fear and anxiety. chernobyl's ears are far more piercing, they take on a far more humanoid shape and their loud screech rings out within an opponent's eardrums. they gain three feet to their body and their wings grow to a 25 foot wingspan. blood drips from their mouth and their fangs jut out disgustingly. the black bird chases those around them and any who come too close within it's proximity feel the effects of severe radiation poisoning, though everything mentioned in this technique is illusory. chernobyl is unable to turn this ability off, though deep down they desperately wish they could. Name: experience fear Class: hollow powers Tier: iii Type: illusion Range: 100m Description: experience fear was gained as time grew and chernobyl wished to make each one of their prey unique. a modification of the passive above and an activated illusion, chernobyl's piercing red eyes begin to glow and whatever her target's worst nightmare is comes to life before them. this power varies dependent upon the fear an opponent ails from, and is completely invalid should the opponent not have a fear. Name: nevermore Class: hollow powers Tier: iii Type: offensive/illusion Range: 100m Description: nevermore was gained as chernobyl learned to engage in direct combat with their opponents. chernobyl releases sharp, jabbed feathers in a flap of their wings that number exactly one hundred. if even one of these jabbed wings pierces an opponent they will take tier iii damage and be overcome by an intense sense of dread, though less so the more feathers strike them and none at all should they be struck by five or more. Name: gust Class: hollow powers Tier: iii Type: defensive Range: 50m Description: gust was gained as chernobyl learned to defend themselves and is the ace up their sleeve in a bad situation. by flapping their large wings, chernobyl sends out a gust of tier iii force that blows all enemies struck by it back and dazes them slightly. chernobyl can also use this to propel themselves off the ground or make distance between themselves and an opponent.
MASTERIES HOLLOW POWERSAVERAGE
WEAPON SKILLBEGINNER
HAND-TO-HANDBEGINNER
HOLLOW TECHNIQUESABOVE AVERAGE
HEALINGMASTERY LEVEL
| SOUL RESILIENCEABOVE AVERAGE
REIATSU CONTROLAVERAGE
STEPPINGAVERAGE
CERO/BALAGILLIAN OR HIGHER
ITEM CREATIONMASTERY LEVEL
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Post by Fuhrer-senpai on Jun 2, 2016 3:56:35 GMT
The Black Bird This is doing entirely too much for a passive. I understand what it is you are going for, but I think you're just going about it the wrong way. Keep in mind that a passive is actually pretty weak in comparison to other techniques, especially at higher levels, so your opponents won't really feel the fear you want them to if they use a technique to help cancel it out, or they have higher advantages than you. I'd recommend taking the part about others feeling fear and anxiety a part of her reiatsu features. You're also going to have to do away with the severe radiation poisoning. That's just way too intense for a tier I technique.
Hollow Technique Mastery Unfortunately this mastery is going to have to be lowered. Hollow techs is a tech-centric mastery (explained in the improvement guide) and for above average, the tier numbers of your techniques needs to add up to 12, yours add up to 8. So you're gonna only be able to start out with below average right now.
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