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Post by Jean Llewe Arpeggio on Nov 23, 2015 4:58:57 GMT
Name: Third Eye
Class: Release
Tier: II
Type: Passive
Range: 50 yard radius sphere around Jean
Description: Jean's reiatsu constantly exudes a form of spiritual radiation that returns sensory data back to him about the build up and flow of reiatsu within a 50 yard radius sphere of himself. This radiation does this by latching onto the reiatsu into the area and then displaying the ability to see it in the form of heat vision in the users minds eye.
Name: Sleeper Gas
Class: Release
Tier: II/III
Type: Passive/Offensive
Range: 50m diameter around Jean
Description: Jean constantly exudes his reiatsu as a purple smoky like cloud that spreads around for 50m at half bala speed and makes it hard to see though Jean can see just fine. Within this cloud there are small bits of radiation (these are miniscule in size resembling flecks of dust) released from Jean as well. They remain dormant until given a command by Jean, at which point something similar to a nuclear explosion (though on a much smaller scale) would occur in which ever location Jean wishes so long as it is within range. The explosion will be tier III.
Name: Sadim Touch
Class: Release
Tier: III
Type: Poison
Range: Physical Contact
Description: Radioactive energy covers Jean's hands making it so that anything he touches breaks down at a molecular level and begins to disintegrate and turn to dust. Upon contact with the opponent Jean forces the energy covering his hands inside the opponent where it attempts to begin to cause the particles holding the body together to enter something similar to radioactive decay, resulting in disintegration. Has a 7 post duration.
Name: Gamma Juice
Class: Release
Tier: II
Type: Passive
Range: Self
Description: Jean is able to give himself a boost using the radioactive energy. He can switch between a x2 speed or strength boost. |
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Post by BM on Nov 25, 2015 3:33:51 GMT
Radiation Manipulation - This is really to vague, you need to go into more detail as to what this actually does from a technique perspective.
Sleeper Gas - Gonna say denied on this one, since its basically a poison that enters the body way to easily and then explodes, which wouldn't be allowed for a number of reasons.
Sadim Touch - This would be Poison not offensive. Also the tech breaking down thing needs to go with how its worded, you could break down physical objects but energy doesn't break down energy "at the molecular level" kek.
Gamma Juice - This does too much for a single tech. You can have a 2x boost in one area that can be temporarily boosted to 3x, or you have have a boost that can switch back and forth from 2x speed to 2x strength but not both
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Post by Jean Llewe Arpeggio on Nov 26, 2015 5:10:28 GMT
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Post by BM on Nov 27, 2015 18:52:10 GMT
Sleeper Gas - Do these radiation particles have a size? Also add that they can only move at half bala speed.
Sadim Touch - Remove the half bala speed spread of the disintegration, it would just be tier III disintegration damage.
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