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Satoshi Yamada

"The strongest steel must be forged in the heart of the fire"

the crimson flash || male|| Straight || non-rogue ||  Squad 12

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APPEARANCE

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PERSONALITY

There really is no non-blunt way to put it. Satoshi is a bloodthirsty yet contradictory killer. At first or even second glance, Satoshi seems like a warm and kind hearted individual, almost always having a very light/faint smile on his face, yet more then anything, he is very ruthless. In this aspect, he is much like Aizen, but more ruthless. Usually when Satoshi gets into a fight, he prefers to end it with the least amount of effort as possible.

However, if the enemy chooses to try and prolong the fight, or he gets damaged a lot, Satoshi might go into a frenzy. At which point, he is out for purely blood, often beating his opponent with his fists or continues stabbing his opponent long after he/she has been defeated. At one point because of this, Satoshi was even nicknamed Kenpachi Jr, however, his enemies hardly ever lasted long enough for him to go into such a mode, so they could hardly call him that.

Satoshi does not enjoy boring things, often doing extreme things to to prolong the fun. He also holds back on almost every fight, as if his opponent is "Trash" he likes to dispose of it quickly so the trashes stink doesn't infect him. To try and put it in simple terms, Satoshi always wears a thick mask of slight childishness and calm/collected outside, always acting as if he had no troubles, often staying pleased in most situations.

However, if he gets into too deep of a fight, he becomes focused on his surroundings to the point where it's primal, and he can (not always) go into a state where he enjoys battle quite a lot. In his outer layer, he is always merciful to a certain degree, almost always giving a second chance with a catch. However, if it does come down to it, Satoshi will kill anyone who does not please him, and will feel no remorse for it, bloodthirsty or not. But...there is a deeper side to it. When Satoshi is not trying to put up a mask, he is always...grieving. His face becomes that of nothing but grim and sorrow, and only when he is released from boredom or general depression from his troubled childhood does his playful mask renew itself.

» likes

<li>Watching entertaining things (fights, struggles)

Analyzing and strategizing

Finding interesting people

When everything goes according to plan

Human food

»Dislikes

Boring people

Unloyal subordinates

Cocky individuals

People who think they can rule, but can't.

HISTORY

As a kid in the Rukongai, Satoshi was always alone and had to fend for himself. One might thing this is sad, or even lonely. However, that same person will not think that after they would see his personality. Often times Satoshi would be given food, then spat on for being so desperate for it. At that moment, the individual who spat on Satoshi would never have a jaw to spit with again. His nickname that was known by few was called "The Crimson one." Because his fists and clothes were almost always covered in blood from beating up all who pitied him.

This all started back when Satoshi's memories were few, and so were his friends. He met a group that called themselves the "Kings of Rukon." This of course, was just a bunch of children who had nothing to do all day but to steal food and hang out. Satoshi was always playful and cheerful back then, never ever getting into fights, always being the wimp of the group whom would be reluctant to steal anything.

The only thing he was good at more then the rest of them was using a sword. Every single one of the kids thought to become the "Kings of Rukon" they had to have a sword to protect themselves. They modeled themselves after Shinigami and called them Zanpakuto. Satoshi was always better then all of them at being able to use it, but said he was never going to harm anyone. One day, the boy came back from a mission with his friend, when he saw a pile of blood in front of their tiny fort. Him and his friend Nejiah knew that something was wrong, so they ran inside, only to find a three men standing over two boys laying on the ground, soaked in blood. When Satoshi looked up at the men as they looked back, he and his friend were sharing the same thought that they must of put up a fight, because they were covered in their own blood.

However, immediately after that, Satoshi alone realized something....they were covered in the boys blood. Satoshi fell down, paralyzed with fear, and crept into a corner. Nehiah called Satoshi a coward and ran toward the three knife wielding men, who looked at him with devilish smiles and faced him doing an uneven about face. One of them men caught the boys wooden sword just before he was about to swing it, and kicked him to the ground by giving him a foot to the knee.

The boy screamed in pain ( no one heard since it's on the outskirts of the Rukon&nbsp;district) and the three men began to stab Nejiah over and over until he screamed his last defiant scream. As this happened, the three men wiped the smirk off their face as they saw Satoshi standing up with two wooden swords in his hand.

One of the men threw his knife at Satoshi, but it hit the wall. Somehow, he missed from only ten feet away, but a thought struck the three men. He didn't miss, the knife got evaded. Satoshi was so fast to dodge, they didn't even see him move. Satoshi, blood soaked from the corner that was soaked with blood as well, ran toward the trio of men, twirling&nbsp;furiously.

One of the men tried to go for his knife, but got a sharp uppercut slice to his groin, and he toppled over while trying to punch the boy, but Satoshi easily did a 360 and parried with the sword in his left hand, while bringing the sword on the right on top of his head, shattering the sword. The man,&nbsp;unconscious, was not all bloody as Satoshi continued to beat him with the remaining sword in a frenzy.

Witnessing this, the two men screamed and ran for Satoshi, but the boy simply bellowed and sent a huge wave of spirit energy at the two men, and they got blown through the fort. As this happened, he threw down the sword and took the knife from the wall, and ran for the two injured men. One of them jabbed a knife at his gut, but he side-stepped to the right and caught the arm with his left elbow and tightened, slashing his throat with a clean flick of the wrist.

He then kicked him to the grown, and threw the knife at the other mans chest, hitting him dead center...Satoshi realized what he had done, and blocked it out of his mind as he ran over to his friends and began crying furiously. Two days had gone by and news had spread around the Rukon district of what had happened. It had been counted as self defense, but Satoshi had never been the same after that. A piece of him died the day he killed those men, and a new piece was reborn.

Ten years after that, he was found on the upper parts of the Rukon district fighting off two other boys with a metal pole, and struck them both down with absolutely no technique. Realizing his potential, a squad 12 member invited him to join, realizing his potential and abnormally large Reiatsu.

Satoshi gladly joined, as he wanted to get off those filthy streets. In order to mask his inner demon, the boy had set up a mental block, and has been calm and peaceful ever since he has joined, carefully growing stronger, his bloodthirsty personality getting less ruthless and more focused, but still there nonetheless. He realized Aizen had been defeated and Las-Noches claimed by some man named "The Mad King." Satoshi was determined to overthrow this false king and claim Hueco Mundo to restore it to its maximum potential, all he had to do...was bide his time...

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Post by Satoshi on Oct 3, 2015 23:37:31 GMT

KIDOU THE DEMON ARTS

HADO

Name: Shakkahō (Shot of Red Fire) *

Number: 31

Class: Kido

Tier: III

Type: Hadō

Range: Long

Incantation: Ye Lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, The sea barrier surges, March on to the south!

Description: Fires a ball of red energy at a target.

BAKUDO

Name: Kyokko (Curving Light) *

Number: 26

Class: Kido

Tier: III

Type: Bakudō

Range: Long

Incantation: Unknown

Description: Hides the target from sight by bending light. This Kidō can completely mask the presence and reiatsu of the target from detection but if any other combat technique is activated, this Kidou is overwhelmed and broken.

Name: Geki (Strike) *

Number: 9

Class: Kido

Tier: II

Type: Bakudō

Range: Short

Incantation: Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!

Description: Engulfs a target in red light, completely paralyzing them.

HEALING

MISCELLANEOUS

~~CUSTOM KIDOU~~

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KIDOU SPECIALISATIONS

Eishōhaki (詠唱破棄, "Incantation Abandonment"): is the skill in which a Kidō practitioner skips using a spoken incantation completely, but it drastically weakens the spell. This is applied as a 1-2 tier drop in the spells power depending on ones Kidou mastery, 2 for Beginner up to Advanced, and 1 for Mastered and above. However this also lowers the spells cooldown to match the lowered tier, to a minimum of Tier I.e.g A Tier IV Kidou be cast with Eishohaki as a tier II, its cooldown will also be the same at 0 posts.

BATTLE SKILLS

name: Senkouzan Lesser (Flash Slash Lesser)

type:;Offensive

range;Close-Medium

Class:Zanjutsu

tier: II-III

description:The user quickly draws his/her sword at half bala speed or bala speed (depending on the chosing Tier), and brings it up, slashes it down as it's draw, slashes it left, or slashes it right. Any one of the previously given choices may be used for this technique. And as this happens, in an instant usually before the opponent can even see it happen, they have a gash on them. This technique is usually used for very fast opening attacks, or to finish an opponent quickly. If given 2+ advantages, it has the capability to split someone in two. At 1- advantages, the slash may do a relatively small cut, and at no advantages, a large gash is viable to happen, and may extend up to 25 yards away.

Name: Megami no sutoraiki Lesser (The goddess strikes lesser)

Type: Offensive

Class: Zanjutsu

Range: Close

Tier: III

Description: The user gets in a stance where the right or left side of their body is pointed at the opponent, and a sword (or swords) is held in a stance pointing toward your opponent at eye level, and the user jabs at the enemy &nbsp;50-125 times, but no matter the size, all the strikes of either 50, or 125 add up to Tier III damage regardless of how many strikes are chose, it's just that 50 individual strikes are stronger then 125, but always add up to the same damage.

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Name: Shunpo (Flash Steps)

Class: Stepping

Type: Stepping

Range: N/A

Tier: I

Description: A movement technique that allows the user to move extremely quickly over short distances. The focal point that determines the basis of this technique is speed. Therefore what determines the level of skill in a user for Shunpo is best characterized by how fast one can get from A to B in the least amount of steps.

ITEMS

REIATSU FEATURES

ZANPAKUTOU

Kiyomemasu "The Cleanser"

Ion manipulation

"Singe...."

SEALED FORM

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SPIRIT APPEARANCE

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SPIRIT PERSONALITY

If anything,Kiyomemasu is very ruthless and cold, but uncaring isn't quite the way to describe him. When he attacks with his wielder, he does not show mercy, and will gladly kill, but it's not like he doesn't show any remorse. If he kills a skilled opponent, he would be the one to make a comment like "What a shame, we could of used such a tool." Or if he killed someone who couldn't defend themselves, he would say "Shame that such trash are alive, good think there is one less." However, he has an underbelly to him. If and when his wielder goes on a rampage of any kind, or mass killing, he will gain a bloodthirsty attitude that is amplified if his user feels the same thing. Overall, he is very held/laid back in his personality, and seems to not care about anything as long as his wielder is satisfied. But when he complains, he complains. He will disallow his wielder to release him, and he will force him to talk to him. He's loyal, but not a slave. When attacking someone or toying with them, he will smile the entire time while giving his wielder thoughts such as "Be careful Satoshi, his filthy blood might get on your clothes." Beyond anything, he is sassy. He will not hesitate to take any opportunity to be so as well...The reason his name is "The Hideous One" is to compliment his ability. Since he has the ability to to repel, that makes him repulsive. However, that affects him in a physical way as well, often hiding his appearance in a bandanna and a large straw hat.

INNER WORLD

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SHIKAI

SHIKAI APPEARANCE

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appearance: This scythe has three blades, each of which are attached to a metal cylinder, which is attached to a detachable piece of metal. The scythe blades are red, with a tint of white, and the metal cylinders are silver. The handle is red as well, but the beginning of the hilt is wrapped in white bandages. The three curved scythe blades get smaller in descending order, giving the scythe a larger range, despite decreasing its lethality. The scythe is attached to a long metal cable, which can extend up to 50 meters in length, giving it a very long range, and can be pulled back with precision and ease. The metal parts at the end of the scythe may also detach, causing each of the scythe blades to extend with a metal cable connecting all 3 of them, and can be attached back together just as easily, as well as the metal cable on the scythe can be shrunken as well. The cable is strong enough to block Zanpakuto, and has the durability of one.

SHIKAI ABILITIES

Name:Sosa( Ion Manipulation )

Type: Omnipotent (Defensive,Supplementary,Offensive)

Tier: II-IV

Class: Shikai Technique

Range: 25 Meters

Description: Allows for the manipulation and/or creation of charged particles/ions. Electricity, being a byproduct of ions, is also able to be used. The charged particles can be made to cause objects to attract or repel one another. Other applications include clinging to walls to climb up, power/draining electronic devises. An example of repelling/attracting would be charging a object with positive, or negative, ions and charging another with the same would cause objects to repel one another however if it is a different charge then attract.

(It is important to note that for this ability, variety does not equal quantity. The added on "Abilities" are simple the capability of one ability through physics.)

Regardless of Tier chosen, this technique is only allowed to move at the speed of a Cero, no faster. The ions may also be placed onto reiatsu to redirect it, by attaching a charge to the reiatsu and a polar charge somewhere else to re-direct the ions that are placed, hence redirecting the reaitsu as well. By charging an incoming attack with ions and when the character creates charged ions of the opposite charge near him, the blast can be repelled due to the oppositely charged ions repelling each other, not the actual attack. Attacks may also be redirected this way. So in conclusion, the ions attached to the abilities get repelled along with the ability, not the ability itself.

A capability of this technique is to also push ions in the area together, which build up pressure. With a one round wait, buildin up ionic pressure in an area can cause it to push together in a forceful ionic blast, causing 2-4 tier damage. Also, the user may control charges in the air in areas that have a sufficient amount of ionic particles. There is a safe zone a centimeter away from the skin of Satoshi.

So the user may either charge a certain area in the air (up to 25 meters) positively or negatively, and may even rapidly charge areas proved it is tier 3 or below. It is possible to control ions and their charges in living things that have a large amount of ions in them, but only if they have a large amount. It is also possible to control the ions to such a degree as to split the ions, in the air within 25 meters, which causes the oxygen to dissipate quickly. On the first post, the oxygen is thin. On the third post after this has happened, oxygen within the chosen area (area is allowed to be moved along with the chosen target) is gone, thus the air is no longer breathable, and the target must re-locate.

Name:;Raion Jemini (Ion Gemini) (Outer)
Type: Passive/Supplementary [Sensory]

Tier: Tier II/III-IV

Range: 25 Meters (Radius, me being at the center)

Class: Shikai Technique

Description: This creates a field of ions around the user. There is an inner field and outer field. This is the outer

The ions in this layer allow the user to see a mental map of the area. This includes anything physical or spiritual, as well detect reiatsu. Moving through this field can be slightly difficult, as difficult as it would be for anyone moving through water. These particles can be manipulated into various shapes and forms. Such as blades, shields tendrils, and everyday mundane objects are also a possibility. Each object created lasts one-five posts without going back to it's original form.

(These shapes and abilities are only possible through Ionic manipulation. If Ion manipulation is disabled, objects cannot be created)

This field reaches exactly 25 meters in a perfect sphere. It is possible to breathe in this substance, however it takes a significantly longer time period for enough ions to accumlate inside the enemies body to do anything. Particles in the enemies body lasts for four posts once reached maximum level, and it takes 3 posts of breathing these particles for them to be used by Ion manipulation.

There is a plentiful supply of ions in this field. It does not matter if the enemy moves in and out of this field, the supply of ions stay inside of them for the duration, and it does not restart the time for their to be enough ions to manipulate in their body. Once every post, sparks of electricity dance across the outside of the sphere, and is only possible to see outside of the sphere. (This is to show the visibility of the sphere) Objects cannot exceed tier III, and tier I objects can be spammed. The time it takes to make these objects would be the time it would take for the speed of a tiered ability to reach the area. For example, to create a tier III object 10 meters away, it would take the same amount of time a technique of half-bala speed to reach from the user to 10 meters away as it would to create the object.

Name:Raion Jemini (Ion Gemini) (Inner)

Type: Passive/Supplementary/Defensive

Tier: Tier II/II-IV

Range: 5 meters. (Radius me being at the center)

Class: Shikai Technique

Description: This creates a of ions around the user. There is an inner field and outer field. This is the inner

Inner Field: The ions in this field are in a solidified state, trapped between being a solid and a gas. Making it very similar to a liquid in nature.

A multitude of objects can be created at any given time, however, the totality of the objects are equal to the Tier used. However, individual objects can be created one at a time and remain at the Tier but only last for a post and can't exceed Tier IV. This field reaches exactly 5 meters in a perfect sphere. It is possible to breathe in this substance. In this field, there are both negative and positive ions. There is an over-abundance of ions in this field. If the enemy breathes in this substance, they are instantly counted as having a sufficient amount of ions to control within their body. Every post, a crackle of extremely fast energy dances across the outside of the barrier, and may only be seen from the outide. (This is to show the visibility of the sphere) Objects created in this sphere can also be used as a defense, and tier II~III objects have to be renewed every post or be recreated. It does not take energy to renew, but it does take energy to re-create. If an object is destroyed, it has to be re-created. Unlike its twin ability, the inner field cannot be used as a sensory ability and thus is inferior in variety.

Name: Raion Kakumei (Ionic Revolution)

Type: Passive/Supplementary

Tier:I

Class: Shikai Technique

Range: Self

Description: Satoshi applies a variety of ions to his body whenever he so chooses (meaning he can apply this effect on and off at will with a one post prep for it to come off, and off.) and when he does this, he officially becomes "Energized." What this means is, the character has elongated stamina, and he may increase to full speed instantly with no required momentum building. Usually when you start sprinting, or dodge objects, there is a point where you move slow, then get faster quickly or tediously whatever the case may be. Satoshi being "Energized" means he does not have to wait for this to happen, and the point from him being still to full speed is non-existent. For example, if an enemy tries to send a kick at him, his fist doesn't start out slow then get fast very quickly to block, his fist instantly goes into full speed. And say Satoshi wants to sprint toward an enemy. There is no point where Satoshi runs and gains momentum to get to full speed, he runs and instantly reaches full speed. There are no repercussions for getting from no movement to full speed with no lag.

Summary of ability: There is no speed boost present, and there is no alteration of reality. This simply used electric charges to stimulate the body's fast twitch muscles, causing instant top speed (flash step not included or incorporated.) If one is slow in top speed, then that person would reach top speed but it would not increase the maximum level of speed.

~~BANKAI~~

~~BANKAI NAME~~

~~BANKAI TYPE~~

~~BANKAI APPEARANCE~~

~~BANKAI ABILITIES~~

MASTERIES

ZANPAKUTOU SPIRIT

average

WEAPON SKILL

above average

HAND-TO-HAND

beginner

REIRYOKU TECHNIQUES

beginner

HEALING

N/A

SOUL RESILIENCE

above average

REIATSU CONTROL

average

STEPPING

above average

KIDOU

above average

ITEM CREATION

Beginner

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Satoshi Yamada Oct 4, 2015 9:59:59 GMT

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You'll want to either increase your age of appearance or decrease your overall actual age. Although there is nothing concrete it is clear that souls age and said they do. With respect to Yamamato he looked roughly eighty-ninety years old and was actually around 1001, so using that as a reference your character would appear close most likely to forties-fifties being he is 507 years old, of course there is some leway but nineteen is too young.

Also do you want help with the editing? Your spacing and text font in some areas seems to be a bit messed up to me.

Sosa( Ion Manipulation ) - This should be supplementary as type too since it allows for non-combat options, climbing, sticking to ceilings, etc. Also it's doing way too many things here. It's an explosive usage, a repellent for attacks, sucks air out of the area, and is a supplemental usage all in one. The variation of uses seems far too broad even if it does have a central theme for me.

Raion Jemini (Ion Gemini) (Outer) - This also to me should not have the uses it does. It should either be weapon creation via particles or sensory, it is too varied to assume the tech can do both and essentially allows you a free tech in that regard. Also for your range you have 25 meters, but note in the description 30 meter perfect sphere. Please you'll need to clarify and adjust which is correct as well as add if it's a 25/30 meter radius or diameter. You say Tier I objects can't be spammed, but your Tier section doesn't even support Tier I let alone Tier I is reserved primarily for passives, so this would not even work for a weapon it would be mostly useless in battle. If you use the Tier IV version of this the whole tech will go down into cooldown, meaning the sphere itself will collapse for the cooldown period.

Raion Jemini (Ion Gemini) (Inner) - You need to mark 5 meter radius or diameter. If you use the Tier IV version of this the whole tech will go down into cooldown, meaning the sphere itself will collapse for the cooldown period.

Raion Kakumei (Ionic Revolution) - As a note at least for movement, to me this is no different than Shunpo. Essentially you quickly accelerate and can move at top speeds in a blink. However, note also if someone had a higher stepping mastery then you, you'll still be outclassed in the respect of agility.

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Post by Satoshi on Oct 4, 2015 19:02:01 GMT

Sosa [Ion Manipulation] It's been stated even when it was previously approved in the last website right before being taken down that I'm controlling ions, not giving them abilities. My limit to my abilities as per ion manipulation is the actual physics of ion manipulation. And theoretically and scientifically speaking, all these things I listed are possible and can be easily done through the use of manipulating positive and negative ions.

Raion Jemini [Ion Gemini] [Outer] As per the abilities of this, the whole reason it's range is limited up to 25, and even 5 meters for inner, is to balance out it's capabilities. Also, keep in mind I'm not actually creating weapons through the use of the ability, I'm saying the ions are more condensed, and through the use of Ion Manipulation, I can band together these condensed Ions to form an actual solid anomaly. And this whole technique is technically a passive, since it by itself is completely harmless. The ability itself is a tier 1 passive of sensory, with more ions, which are also compacted. The ability to make weapons with it remain with Ion manipulation, they can only be spammed because of the fact the area has more ions.

(Do keep in mind, everything stated in all of these abilities (besides Ionic revolution) is theoretically doable in physics, they're all within physics)

Rain Jemini: I know full well what would happen if I used the Tier 4, I made this knowing all of what could and will happen, that's the whole point. I've made it within actual real life limitations, and gave it weaknesses and great limits. By the way, since I'm the center point of these techniques, Inner and outer.

Ionic Revolution: The last mod had a problem with this too, until I explained it. I'm not accelerating at all, and I'm not reaching Shunpo speeds. If I was a slow runner, and could only reach 8 mph, it would erase the time it would take for me to run from 0 to 8. I go from 0 to 8 instantly. Stamina is still in play, and so is agility and mobility. While with shunpo, I might be able to move 30 mph (just an example) if I were to run without using it, I'd only go 8 mph. So essentially, here's an equation I used to work it out. A=Acceleration B=Time C=Top speed.

A+B=C However, With ionic Revolution, it crosses out B and A. Meaning only C is left. Only top speed is left. I could kick you and it would instantly become the speed it would of If I accelerated it to my max possible speed.

I'll fix all you wish.

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Sosa - so you say that it is harmless in itself but proceed to explain all the applications, such as manipulating items (somewhat telepathically) as well as creating an explosive force. It is still a lot to do with a single ability, there needs to be limits. even general elemental manipulation do not have such variety.

Raion (Inner) - Again, too many applications. They're not similar applications which would warrant them both being allowed, it is basically two different abilities in one.

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Satoshi Yamada Oct 5, 2015 13:28:25 GMT

Post by Satoshi on Oct 5, 2015 13:28:25 GMT

Sosa-There are limits, took measures during this. For example, I greatly decreased the range this ability used to have, as well to make sure that it isn't fully passive. And this has more capabilities simply because it's not an element. For example, magnetism itself would have just as many applications as this. Think of it as this. Ions can be positive and negative, when making one area "Charged" with negative, and my feet charged with positive, those two areas can stick. Now, putting a condensed amount of those two together would cause friction. Too much, and boom. Too little, and you now have no oxygen. Perfect amounts, you have a weapon. It's all a matter of basic physics, and I do make sure to note that it's not like I can do all these things simultaneously. I may be able to do one or two things within the same post, but to be able to use all of it, I'd obviously have to wait.

Raion (Inner) And technically, the only field that has an actual "Ability" is outer, which is sensory. One, inner doesn't have sensory, so anyone within the 5 meters, I'd technically have no way of knowing they were there other then intuition or actual use of spirit energy sensing. Items can be created, and they can only remain for one post after I made them, and can be used for defensive purposes (putting the created chair in front of me) as well as supplementary (sitting on the chair) as well as offensive (hitting someone with the chair). The only real ability this field has is the fact that the ions are more charged.

This isn't a matter of...necessarily...what the techniques allow me to do, they all have essentially one ability, but it is more along the lines of what my imagination can do with these things. The only reason I have all these "Abundance" of abilities is because I wrote them down only to cover all basis, and examples. If you write down fire manipulation, and that's it, obviously the admins and mods will only assume controlling fire. However, they don't assume what you can actually do with that fire if you were to use imagination. You could wrap it around you, pressurize it for fiery explosions, ect. This is the same concept. Not several abilities, several opportunities to do things with these abilities.

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Satoshi Yamada Oct 6, 2015 18:18:23 GMT

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Discussed with staff, ruling still stands. Each ability has far too many application, being able to move 0-100 instantly is also too much. This is a shikai so it shouldn't be capable of doing all of these at once, either heavily nerf or denied.

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Satoshi Yamada Oct 6, 2015 18:25:52 GMT

Post by Mist on Oct 6, 2015 18:25:52 GMT

Also, I'd like to remind you that "The instant you start loopholing and trying to abuse the systems, you get a week temporary site ban, in which we will pull and delete the character in question and all it’s techs, without cashing out on the conversion thread. Again, if this remains, this can warrant a permanent." - This is pulled right from the site rules.

While I do not accuse of it right now, you are hereby informed that this is also an offense, one that can deliver you some nasty punishment.

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Satoshi Yamada Oct 6, 2015 18:34:55 GMT

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Loopholing? I made a character and explain how it works, that's not a loophole.

Second, If I erased all I said I could do with these ions, I'd still (physics sake) be able to do these things in the first place.

And what exactly am I suppose to nerf? Nothing is exactly OP.

I'll do what I can but after that my hands are tied.

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Satoshi Yamada Oct 6, 2015 18:38:32 GMT

Post by Satoshi on Oct 6, 2015 18:38:32 GMT

I'm also confused as to why it has "too many applications." It seems to me your saying it's too diverse and imaginative, but I did explain all the abilities (inner/outer/sosa) all only do one thing.

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Satoshi Yamada Oct 6, 2015 19:37:16 GMT

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this is an RP site, the ammount of applications possible with Ion manipulation is too great, in fact it should warrant several more abilities even with just the first technique.

I guess you can say that we're saying its too diverse, because it is in fact, far too diverse. Also you say after a bit inside your fields you can manipulate the ions in their body, what exactly will that allow you to do. They also don't all just do one thing, lets count.

Sosa -
1) Allows for the manipulation and/or creation of charged particles/ions. Electricity, being a byproduct of ions, is also able to be used.
2) The charged particles can be made to cause objects to attract or repel one another.
3) Other applications include clinging to walls to climb up, power/draining electronic devises.
4) It is also worth noting that the user can slam oppositely charged ions together to build pressure, and when given enough time (one post charge) the ions build up so much pressure that the user can no longer push them together, and they are forced to split apart which causes tier 2-4 pressure/explosive
5) So the user may either charge a certain area in the air (up to 25 meters) positively or negatively, and may even rapidly charge areas proved it is tier 3 or below. It is possible to control ions and their charges in living things that have a large amount of ions in them, but only if they have a large amount. It is also possible to control the ions to such a degree as to split the ions, in the air within 25 meters, which causes the oxygen to dissipate quickly. On the first post, the oxygen is thin.

Raion Jemini (Ion Gemini) (Outer) -
1) The ions in this layer allow the user to see a mental map of the area. This includes anything physical or spiritual, as well detect reiatsu.
2) Moving through this field can be slightly difficult, as difficult as it would be for anyone moving through water.
3) These particles can be manipulated into various shapes and forms. Such as blades, shields tendrils, and everyday mundane objects are also a possibility.

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Satoshi Yamada Oct 7, 2015 2:46:12 GMT

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Those are things they can do. Ions individually are either positive or negative, so CONTROLLING THEM seperatally can cause things to stick to eachother, which allows you to STICK TO WALLS, you can put them together through MANIPULATING and cause extreme tension which causes them to explode.

For Ion Gemini, it allows you to see a mental map of the area, and I can easily get rid of the "Hard to move through it" if that would allow it to be accepted, however the area being allowed to be manipulated into shapes is dependent on Ion manipulation.

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Satoshi Yamada Oct 23, 2015 4:57:51 GMT

Post by yume on Oct 23, 2015 4:57:51 GMT

If I can put in my two cents, as an advocate for technique creation, and loving to help people out with them, I have to agree with both parties here. Satoshi, I understand the concepts of what you are working with, and the staff members who posted here are also valid in terms of what they are explaining.

Satoshi; when it comes to Role playing here on the site, we have rules in place to limit how much a single technique can do. Ion manipulation is just another way of saying that you have complete control of molecular formation, which is, for the most part, without limitations. Granted, there may not be many rules in place for ion, or molecular manipulation.

I would probably be frank in saying that I would like to see this level of manipulation actually listed in our standard as something that must be heavily limited... cause you say ion, and suddenly, you have access to do anything with your shikai, and that would be a huge no. So I would implore reconsidering the opinions of the staff, and also to take their advise.

Thank you so very much for taking the time to read this, Satoshi.

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