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Post by Aien Lunasinger on Feb 23, 2017 9:05:44 GMT
Name: Nankaina Ame "Arcane Rain" Class: Reiryoku Technique Tier: II-III Type: Offensive Range: Tier II; 10m radius/ Tier III; 15m radius Description: By raising the index finger at the designated direction while concentrating and refining the reishi into reiryoku; the user can launch from a 10 meter radius at Tier II up to 15 meter radius at Tier III of multiple condensed reishi that resembles as six inch needles that is no bigger than a finger. These needles pierce and cut the targets within the range equivalent to its respective Tier. Using the elements of water, the needles cut like highly pressurized spiritual water that is fired from the user. While it does spread in a cone similar to a shotgun, it is much more effective at point blank range so that the target(s) can feel the full force of the technique. The needles travel at Bala speed as Tier II and half Bala speed in Tier III.
Name: Ryuu Rasshu "Dragon Rush" Class: Reiryoku Technique Tier: IV Type: Offensive Range: Close (5m radius) Description: A dim, rose glowing sparks enveloped around the user's body as, for aesthetics purpose only, assumes the appearance of a phantom draconic skull through reiryoku. It is a clear and obvious use of this technique as the user delivers a small devastation that's either capable of simply blowing a small hole in someone's body or causing a small crater to form. It is a one time thing without having to use the technique again to gain this benefit. In addition due to the large force being used behind this blow, the target is smacked with a small 5 meter shockwave that moves at Cero speed which causes the target to be knocked back at the same speed for an additional 20 meters away from the user. This technique lasts instantaneous and has a 1 cooldown post.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 24, 2017 3:05:36 GMT
I see what you are doing here and I am for it but your tech is a bit repetitive. If I may suggest something a bit more condensed. Also Tier I is reserved for Passives only so it would be Tier II minimum.
Name: Nankaina Ame "Arcane Rain" Class: Reiryoku Technique Tier: I-III Type: Offensive Range: Tier I; 5m radius/ Tier II; 10m radius/ Tier III; 15m radius Description: With concentration the user is able to refine Reishi into Reiryoku. The Reiryoku forms within a radius of 10 meters at tier II and 15 meters at Tier III in the shape of water needles, each projectile only six inches long and no thicker than a finger. When fired the needles pierce and cut the target, the damage similar to a high pressure water jet dealing damage equal to its tier. It is fired from the user after he/she raises his/her index finger at the designated area and casting it similar to a Kido but as a technique unto itself. Each needle travels at the max speed for its appropriate tier Bala for Tier II and half bala for Tier III. Its most effective range is point blank as the needles spread out in a cone when fired.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 25, 2017 4:19:10 GMT
I also need a speed for your second tech.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2017 0:36:04 GMT
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