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Post by Aien Lunasinger on Feb 2, 2017 20:04:42 GMT
Name: Buredo-tsuki Hanketsu "Bladed Decree" Class: Weapon Skill Tier: III Type: Offensive Range: Self Description: Buredo-tsuki Hanketsu is a technique that is a more tachi oriented since it is for the Seven Leaves fighting style. It is considered one of the basic yet useful techniques a practitioner can learn. For the use of this technique, the user utilizes his/her speed with a x2 speed buff as the goal is to be fast and accurate. Useful when the user wishes to make precision strikes while gaining the speed benefit for that brief moment. This technique has been commonly known that it puts a large strain on the body since there's nothing spiritual about it. After a while of constant use the user will become fatigued from putting too much strain on the body and can possibly hurt the body internally if used during the fatigue. It is an instantaneous technique.
Name: Danmaku-rei "Barrage Decree" Class: Weapon Skill Tier: IV Type: Offensive Range: Close. (5 Meters) Description: Danmaku-rei is an advanced version of Buredo-tsuki Hanketsu. The practitioner moves about as fast as a Cero while unleashing a barrage of these precise attacks on a set area close to the practitioner. Otherwise the user maintains the x2 speed buff for just this technique as it deals equivalent damage of Tier IV to individuals caught in this small area. This technique puts a greater strain on the body and the user is usually prone for attacks during the cooldown. Simply because the user would be so winded from using this technique that they would need a minute at best to catch their breath. In which case, if this technique is used five times consecutively within three posts is when the user enters a state of fatigue. It is an instantaneous technique with a 1 post cooldown.
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Post by Fuhrer-senpai on Feb 2, 2017 21:59:45 GMT
Bladed Dance Any buff outside of release can be x3 max with, at minimum, a tier VI power and suitable drawbacks. This can be changed to work, however, tier VI's are not available at your current rank level, so we can go ahead and change this to what it needs to be, or you may rework it to make it available now for your character.
Barrage Decree The same thing as above, regarding the x3 speed buff.
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Post by Aien Lunasinger on Feb 2, 2017 22:22:20 GMT
I never put down a Tier VI, it was a Tier IV (4). At any rate the Bladed Decree is a Tier III and I simply lowered the speed buff to just x2. Additionally I elaborated on how much of a strain it puts on the physical body. Barrage Decree is still a Tier IV technique and is also reduced on the speed buff to just x2 and elaborated on the drawbacks it would have upon use.
My character won't be able to learn any of these techniques any time soon due to his current circumstances, but I'm going ahead on making these techniques in case if he somehow escapes or something.
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Post by Mike on Feb 3, 2017 22:12:31 GMT
Simply remove that portion. It is misleading: Can be mistaken that your strikes are equal in power to a Tier III alongside the x2 speed buff.
You'll need to state how many posts is "after a while". Since this technique lasts for a split moment rather than an entire post, make it so five uses within maybe three posts is when he feels the fatigue.
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Post by Aien Lunasinger on Feb 4, 2017 9:09:25 GMT
Fixed
Edit: Also Blitzy I apologize for my previous response, I might be reading it too much but I honestly felt that I sounded like an ass. I was simply pointing out things what I have placed down and tried to explain it as simple as possible.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 7, 2017 3:23:39 GMT
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